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nagma e tarq e muhabbat. - 1st December 2012, 01:58 PM

zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.

uski bagal men meri jagah na rahi , mere
kandhe ki uske sar ko zarurat nahi rahi.

dono jahaan jis pe lutaa du khushi-2
ab naaz men tere wo nazaakat nahi rahi.

aik barq si gira de jo rag-2 men dafatan
ab lams men tere wo haraarat nahi rahi.

raste men kho gayi kahi manzil ki aarzoo
chaahat to mil gayi ki haa chaahat nahi rahi.

   
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1st December 2012, 08:12 PM

dosto is ghazal ke in teen ashaar men kuch galtiya ho gayi thee.durust karke pesh kar rahaa hu.

zauq e wisaal o dahshat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab mujhko tujhse koi ummiden nahi bachi
ab tujhko mujhse koi shikaayat nahi rahi.

pahloo men uske meri jagah na rahi ufaq
us sar ko mere kaandhe ki haajat nahi rahi.
   
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dosto is ghazal ke in teen ashaar men kuch galtiya ho gayi thee.durust karke pesh kar rahaa hu.

zauq e wisaal o dahshat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab mujhko tujhse koi ummiden nahi bachi
ab tujhko mujhse koi shikaayat nahi rahi.

pahloo men uske meri jagah na rahi ufaq
us sar ko mere kaandhe ki haajat nahi rahi.
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zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.

uski bagal men meri jagah na rahi , mere
kandhe ki uske sar ko zarurat nahi rahi.

dono jahaan jis pe lutaa du khushi-2
ab naaz men tere wo nazaakat nahi rahi.

aik barq si gira de jo rag-2 men dafatan
ab lams men tere wo haraarat nahi rahi.

raste men kho gayi kahi manzil ki aarzoo
chaahat to mil gayi ki haa chaahat nahi rahi.

Waah bhai waah

Kya hi khoob ghazal kahi hai. Ek ek sher bahut hi sundar hai. Taareef ke liye shabd nahi'n hai'n mere paas. Duaa hai ke aise hi likhte raho, sadaa khush raho.


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zauq e wisaal o dahshat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab mujhko tujhse koi ummiden nahi bachi
ab tujhko mujhse koi shikaayat nahi rahi.

pahloo men uske meri jagah na rahi ufaq
us sar ko mere kaandhe ki haajat nahi rahi.
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bahot bahot khoob...jitni taareef karun kam hai..daad hi daad... aage bhi aapko padhna chaahunga.. god bless..yeh sher to kamaal ka hai

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bahot hi laa-jawaab koShiSh.. mujhe Ghazal ka maqtaa bahot hi pasand aaya... daad

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.

uski bagal men meri jagah na rahi , mere
kandhe ki uske sar ko zarurat nahi rahi.

dono jahaan jis pe lutaa du khushi-2
ab naaz men tere wo nazaakat nahi rahi.

aik barq si gira de jo rag-2 men dafatan
ab lams men tere wo haraarat nahi rahi.

raste men kho gayi kahi manzil ki aarzoo
chaahat to mil gayi ki haa chaahat nahi rahi.


waahh janaab waahhh... behad khoobsurat kalaam likhaa hai aapne ... Masha Allah... likhte raheN...


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zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.

Masha Allah!! bohat khoob!...




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zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.
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ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.

uski bagal men meri jagah na rahi , mere
kandhe ki uske sar ko zarurat nahi rahi.

dono jahaan jis pe lutaa du khushi-2
ab naaz men tere wo nazaakat nahi rahi.

aik barq si gira de jo rag-2 men dafatan
ab lams men tere wo haraarat nahi rahi.

raste men kho gayi kahi manzil ki aarzoo
chaahat to mil gayi ki haa chaahat nahi rahi.

wah behtreen.......................................... .........................


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zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.


ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.

ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.

uski bagal men meri jagah na rahi , mere
kandhe ki uske sar ko zarurat nahi rahi.

dono jahaan jis pe lutaa du khushi-2
ab naaz men tere wo nazaakat nahi rahi.

aik barq si gira de jo rag-2 men dafatan
ab lams men tere wo haraarat nahi rahi.

raste men kho gayi kahi manzil ki aarzoo
chaahat to mil gayi ki haa chaahat nahi rahi.
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