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Hai Diwaali To Kya... -
24th October 2014, 04:48 AM
Ek taaza ghazal, aapki aara ka intzaar rahega..
है रात जो और काली तो क्या.. के शहर मे है दिवाली तो क्या.. बातो के धमाको पे धमाके.. सूरत भोली सी बना ली तो क्या.. सौदे किये तोहफों के तुम ने.. कीमत मिरी भी लगा ली तो क्या.. मुश्किल है ख़ुशी जो रोशनी मे.. गर रौशनी ही बुझा ली तो क्या.. तेरी कमी हमको ही खले है.. हमने ये कमी छुपा ली तो क्या.. दिल खाली है घर भी खाली खाली.. उम्मीदे सिफ़र सजा ली तो क्या.. -------------- कुनाल (सिफर) 23-10-2014 Hai raat jo aur kaali to kya.. Ke sheh'r mai hai diwaali to kya.. BaatoN ke dhamaako pe dhamaake.. Soorat bholi see bana li to kya.. Saude ki tohfoN ke tumne.. Keemat mirii bhi lagaa li to kya.. Mushkil hai khushi jo roshani mai.. Gar roshni hi bujhaa li to kya.. Teri kami humko hi khale hai.. Humne ye kami chupa li to kya.. Dil khaali hai ghar bhi khaali khaali.. UmmeedeN 'sifar' sajaa li to kya .. --------------- Kunaal (Sifar) 23-10-2014 Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th October 2014, 09:41 AM
kunaal bhi ek se ek sher se sajii hai aapki ye kavitaa......
sabse ahme baat aapne qaafiyaa bahot mushkil chunaa hai aur ise badee khubsurtii se nibhaya bhi hai.... likhte raheN.... mahfil roshan karte raheN.... Shaad..... |
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24th October 2014, 01:00 PM
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Muaf kijiyega .. kavita nahi ghazal kahi hai maine.. ab aap jaise hunarmand ko batana padega kya ..  khair aapko pasand aaya mujhe khushi hai.. Aur bhaa'ii jaaN kafiya mushkil nahi hota.. ya to hota hai ya nahi hota.. haaN wo radeef ke aath nibh jaye ye zara mushkil hota hai.. Aapke aane ka shukriya.. Khyaal rakhiye apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th October 2014, 05:57 PM
Waah waah !! Dheron dheron daad Kunaal sahab !! Khaas baat ye lagi ki bayaan mein saaf-goyee bhi hai aur adaa bhi, ehsaas chubhte huwe bhi hain aur nazaakat bhare bhi !!
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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24th October 2014, 08:00 PM
Wah wah kya baat hai...phir se ek khubsurat ghazal likh di aapne diwali wale din......aur aksar tyoharo pe apno ki kami khil hi jati hai chalo jaan ke acha laga apko bi kisi ki kami ab tak lagti hai asha rakhte hai next diwali tak kisi ki kami na rahe
..takecare you don't need to have anything else. If you don't have it, it doesn't matter much what else you do have. |
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7th November 2014, 10:57 PM
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Aap jaise azeem shora ko apne aashiyaane main dekh ke manmoon hub main.. Aapki tareef ka shukriya Aise hi rabt banaye rakhiye kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th November 2014, 08:57 PM
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तुमको मैं क्यूँ रखूं याद अब.. समझो की मतलबी सा हूँ मैं.. जो मुझे न याद करे मेरे लिए कुछ नहीं वो .. अब इस बात पे क्या कहूँ समझ ही नहीं आ रहा .. क्यूंकि मुझे सबसे ज्यादा बुरा वही लगता है जो मुझे मेरे अतीत से जोड़ता है.. मेरी शायरी कोई किस्सा नहीं है ।। बस शायरी है ... कुनाल Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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25th November 2014, 04:47 PM
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Kunaal ji....bahut accha likhte hai aap...sabhi ashiyaar bahut khaas lge hame...aap jaise shayroN se SDC ki ronak br-qaraar hai...bazm meiN aate rhiye aur ronak banaye rakhiye.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th October 2015, 01:48 PM
waaah....bahut khoob peshkash rahi kunal ji.
Khoob andaaz aur bayangi..... Daad kubool kijiyega.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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