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Waalid ki Wafat Par [Nida Fazli]
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Post Waalid ki Wafat Par [Nida Fazli] - 23rd December 2002, 10:37 AM

DostoN ye ek Khoobsurat Rachna Shri Nida Fazli saahab ki aap sabhi ko pesh karta hooN, aap logoN ne mehboob ke baare me to bahut kuchh likha ya suna hoga ab ek Pita(Father) ke liye Putra(Son) ke jazbaat parhiye, aasha hai aap sabhi ko bhi pasand aayegi.

Waalid ki Wafat Par

Tumhaari Qabr par mai
Fatwa parhne nahi aaya,
Mujhe maaloom tha tum mar nahi sakte
Tumaari maut ki sacchi khabar
Jisne udaai thi, wo jhutha tha,
Wo tum kab the
Koi sukha hua patta, hawa se gir ke tuta tha,

Meri aankheiN
Tumhaare maNzaaroN me qeid hai abtak
Mai jo bhi dekhta hooN, sochta hooN
wo- wo hi hai
Jo tumhaari neknaami or badnaami ki duniya thi,

KahiN kucch bhi nahi badla

Tumhaare haath, meri ungliyoN me saaNs lete haiN
Mai likhne ke liye jab bhi, kagaz kalam uthata hooN,
Tumhe baitha huwa mai
Apni hi kursi me paata hooN,

Badan mai mere , jitna bhi lahu hai
Wo tumhaari
LagzishoN nakaamiyoN ke sath behta hai,
Meri aawaaj me chhupkar, tumhaara zehen rehta hai,

Meri BeemaariyoN me tum
Meri LachaariyoN me tum,

Tumhaari Qabr par jisne tumhaara naam likha hai
Wo jhutha hai,
Tum mujh me jinda ho
Kabhi fursat mile to, fatwa parhne chale aana.

By Nida Fazli

DostoN yadi koi galati ho to maaf kijiega, mai urdu ka achha jaankaar nahi hooN.


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Wah !!! - 17th January 2003, 11:09 PM

Assalam.o.Alaikum Chaand

Bohaaaaaaaaaaat Khoobbbbbb , lajawab post hay ap ki,

Keep it upper )) our aisi hi achi chezain post kartay rahiye

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18th January 2003, 09:41 AM

Shukriya dost apne is post ko parha or apne khayaalat se nawaza, par Maafi chaahuNga is Tareef ka asli haqdar mai nahi

shri Nida Fazli sahab haiN, mai to unke kadmoN ki dhool bhi nahi, ye rachna unki hi hai, mai to unka ek fan hooN.

Par aapki doNoN posts parhi sachmuch bahut achhi hai, Likhte rahiyega.

Ijaajat chahooNga,

Chaand


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Red face hammmmmmmmmmm - 19th April 2003, 07:20 PM

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ek galti ho to mauf ki jaati hai---

galti'o bhari tumhari gazal bahoot boaring hain...


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20th April 2003, 02:47 AM

Salaam

lol lagtha hai govind ko choti choti hi poems pasand hain.Mind na

karna govind par app iss poem ko pare na,phir comment karna.

chaand bohut hi niceeeeeeeeeeee poem hai.


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Cool Shukriya DostoN - 28th April 2003, 11:11 AM

Govind ji Khushi hui ke yahaaN appreciate karne ke alawa galatiyaaN batane wale log bhi haiN.

YakeeN jaaniye meri Urdu ki samajh itni achhi nahi hai to galati hone ki puri sambhawnaaeiN haiN, isiliye aapse gujaarish hai jab bhi koi galati ho to jaroor mention kijiyega is.se hame galatiyaaN sudhaarne ka mauka to milega.

Waise ye Post meri likhi hui nahi hai, Ye janaab Nida Fazli saahab ki hai, jinka ke mai fan hooN.

Agli baar galatiyaaN bhi jaroor mention kijiyega.

shukriya Aaabhaari....Chaand


Rani ji, Shukriya aapki is taareef ke liye, par ye sahi hai ki hame, hamaari galatiyaaN pata chaleiN or galatiyaaN bataane waale bhi apne hi hote haiN.

Ye Chaand aapka bhi shukrgujaar hai.


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4th May 2003, 02:23 AM

chaand sahab maafi kijiyega... lekin is ghazal main 2nd line main jo alfaaz fatwa likha hai woh mujhe kuch galat saa lag raha hai.. waise meri urdu itni sahi to nahi hai lekin mere khaya se waha fatya hona chahiye tha.. just thats whati feel.. may be i am wrong..

thanks for the this posting such great stuff for us..


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zindagi ki nahi hamare Maghfirat ki dua karna..

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10th September 2003, 08:53 AM

chaand dost,
Nida Fazli saahab ki rachna ho aur oose tum hamaare saamne roshni maie laao...... is se badh kar kya baat....
aabhari hu jo itni achhi rachna se hamae parichit karwaya...

sathh he..... jagjit singh ki gaayi hui..... par likha kisne hai woh yaad nahi..... muje yaad aa gayi... yah bhi ek pita ne apne betae ki maut par kahi hui hai...
chithhi na koi sandesh
jaane woh konsa desh
jaha tum chale gayae

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Cool Shukriya Meena ji - 10th September 2003, 10:32 PM

Shukriya Meena ji, ye Rachna wakai bahut khoobsoorat hai ek roj TV par nida sahab ka programme dekhte hue ise pehli baar suna tha, Mene father ke liye likhi gai itni barhiya rachna is'se pehle kabhi nahi parhi thi.

Dusra Geet jo aapne likha hai, Anand Bakshi sahab ne likha hai shayad (I'm not sure about it) Dushman film ke liye, Film me to sister ke liye gaya gaya hai, real life me is gaane ki history mujhe nahi maaloom.

Chalta hooN.

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11th September 2003, 01:01 AM

chand ji assalam u alaikum
sach aapne hum sab ke saamne jo nazm pesh ki hai us nazm se humein waaqif karane ka shukriya.yeh nazm yahan pe post hui sabhi nazmo se alag hai.
sach waldain ke liye jo mohobbat is mein pesh ki gai hai woh lajawaab hai
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Cool Shukriya Khushii Ji - 11th September 2003, 08:46 PM

Shukriya Khushiiiji, aapne is post ko parha, or khushi hui ke aapko ye post pasand bhi aai.

Sahi farmaaya aapne unka ye kalaam kuchh hatkar bhi hai.

Or HaaN Khushiii ji aapke profile se pata chala ke kal aapka B'day tha, kal to na kar paaya,........ Very Happy Belated Barthday to You.

Khush raho.

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11th September 2003, 08:58 PM

chhand dost,
jaha tak muje pata hai ke jab se jagjit singh ke son ki akasmaat maut ho gayi tab se oonhe maine har prog; maie yah gajal gaate jaroor soona hai. is liyae muje laga ke yah ek pita apne bachhae ki maut par ga rahe hai...
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29th September 2003, 12:45 AM

Chand dost

mein behad shirminda hoon ke is nazm ko bohat der se parha mein ne.
mein behad shukur guzaar hoon aap ka ke nida faazli saheb ki itni khoobsoorat aur munfarid poetry father per aap ne post ki.
ham se shair ki.
mujhe zaati taur per yeh nazm bohat pasand aayee.
mein ne nida faazli saheb ko kaafi parha hai magar yeh nazm pehle naheen suni.
aap ne bohat ahchca kiya jo ise yahan post kiyaa.
mere father ki death bhi bohat jaldi ho gaee thee when i was 17.
us waqt mein ne ek shayr parha thaa jo aaj tak mujhe yaad hai balke mere dil per naqsh hai.
"UMR BHAR HAM AAP KI AAGHOSH MEIN PALTE RAHE
JAB HUE KHIDMAT KE QAABIL AAP RUKHSAT HO GAE"

Ek baar phir aap ka shukriya chaand.

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Cool Shukriya dost - 29th September 2003, 11:35 AM

Musharrafhusain ji, sabse pehle to aapka abhinandan(welcome) karta hooN ke aapne Nida saahab ki is post ko itna maan diya, Nida saahab ko sun.na tak apne aap me kuchh seekhne jaisa hai.

Rahi baat deri se parhne ki to mere dost jindgi ki aapa-dhaapi (dour-dhoop) me na jaane kyaa kya chhoot jaata hai, so der se hi sahi aapki nazar to padi ispar ye bhi to baat hai.

Pita ki ahmiyat hamaari jindgi me is aasmaan ki tarah hai, wo hai ya nahi har waqt hamaare upar haath rekhe huwe haiN, so mere dost mai khud Nida saahab ka shukr gujaar hooN pita par itni khoobsoorat rachna likhne par.

Shukriya Dost.

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hi - 31st October 2003, 05:25 PM

hi rakesh

hw r u well is rachna ko to hum pehle hi reply kar chuke hai its a really nice poem

but i wantred to ask u sumfin is this ur favourite poem
pls dont mind me askin i just wana know

aur hws life gng

take care
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17th June 2004, 02:38 AM

Bahut hi achi rachna hai Nida ji ki.
Shukriya Chaand ji, jo aapne yahan post karke hum sab ke saath ise share kiya!



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Shukriya DostoN... - 17th June 2004, 12:37 PM

Romana....aapko reply bahut deri se de raha hooN...ji haaN kisi shaayar ki likhi kam-s-kam father par ....to mujhe ye sabse achchhi rachna lagi....weise bhi pehle hi keh chuka hooN...Nida saahab ka fan hooN mai.

Aapki is taareef ke liye shukriya....tahe dil se.

Chahat123 ji...Shukriya tahe dil se aapka bhi....aapne ise parha pasand kiya, ye Chaand aapka shukriya ada karta hai.

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18th January 2005, 09:18 PM

Thanks Chaand ji..


kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
   
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4th May 2005, 09:29 PM

chaNd bhai....

aaj lag bhag 2 sal 5 mahine ho gaye aapko ye post kiye hue... na jane nida sahab ne ise kab anjaam diya hoga.. par iske ehsasoN maiN us waqt jo ravangi rahi hogi .. utni hi aaj bhi hai.. ye saboot hai is kalaam ke nekdili ka ... ye saboot hai ek bete ka pyar apne walid ke liye ... ye saboot hai ki wakai ehsaas kabhi mar nahi sakte... aur ye duniya wale chahe jitna badal jayen ehsaas ke saye se bachg nahi sakte ... bohat hi khoob .. aisa pyar har beta apne baap ko kare.. aur sach hai ki kuch sath aise hote hai jo kabhi nahi chooth sakte... aur baap bete ka sath bhi apne aap maiN ek mukaam rakhta hai ...

bohat bohat shukriya ise yahaN lane ke liye .. sharminda huN ki meri kismat ab layi mujhe yahaN ....

likhte rahiye yuN hi

aapka bhai

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4th May 2005, 09:38 PM

Ghayalparwana or Parul ji, mai aap donoN ka hi pita ke prati prem samajh sakta hooN so socha ke ek or bete ki ye kriti aap donoN ki nazar karooN ...

KyoNki mai khud bahut hi prabhavit huva tha , jab Nida saahab ne ise khud gaakar sunaya tha ek TV Programme me...


Shukriya dostoN ise pasand karne ke liye.

Kunal mere dost......mai jaanta hooN ke tumhe khoob pasand aayi hogi Nida saahab ki ye rachna....

wo haiN hi itne mahaaN shaayar...

Khair...tum der se aaye...isme sharmindgi keisi...ham khud is jindgi ki daud-dhoop me jaane kya kya ...parhne or sun.ne se chook jaate haiN

So ...koi baat nahi...tumne parha pasand kiya ...ye khushi ki baat hai.

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hi! - 5th May 2005, 02:48 PM

....m wordless...its so touching!
bahot bahot bahot shukriya...ise share karne ka..! chhand ji!

Nida ji k naam Dil se salaam!
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5th May 2005, 03:18 PM

Tumhaari Qabr par mai
Fatwa parhne nahi aaya,
Mujhe maaloom tha tum mar nahi sakte
Tumaari maut ki sacchi khabar
Jisne udaai thi, wo jhutha tha,
Wo tum kab the
Koi sukha hua patta, hawa se gir ke tuta tha,

WaaaaH.. so touching!!


Meri aankheiN
Tumhaare maNzaaroN me qeid hai abtak
Mai jo bhi dekhta hooN, sochta hooN
wo- wo hi hai
Jo tumhaari neknaami or badnaami ki duniya thi,
KahiN kucch bhi nahi badla

Beautful!!


Tumhaare haath, meri ungliyoN me saaNs lete haiN
Mai likhne ke liye jab bhi, kagaz kalam uthata hooN,
Tumhe baitha huwa mai
Apni hi kursi me paata hooN,

Very Touching!!


Badan mai mere , jitna bhi lahu hai
Wo tumhaari
LagzishoN nakaamiyoN ke sath behta hai,
Meri aawaaj me chhupkar, tumhaara zehen rehta hai,

Amazinggggg... bahut hi asardaar!!

Chaand Bhai!!

This one is gem of a creation.. as expressive as a shayri can get...Har lafz me emotions ka flow hai... simply loved it!!

Thx for sharing it here!


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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24th November 2005, 06:32 AM

....m wordless...its so touching!
bahot bahot bahot shukriya...ise share karne ka..! chhand ji!

Nida ji k naam Dil se salaam!
tc
komal
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CHANDSI..

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Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor,
Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door.

Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye
Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





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ho to gai hai bahot der padne main,
par mujhe bahot acchi lagi...


"sanam" chahe zindagi se bas itna
aik mutthi main kaid kar loon,
yeh aasman hai jitna!"
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Hi,

bahoot khub......
Achha laga kuchh naya hatke padhne mila....


Allah hafiz.


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Correction - 20th August 2011, 12:23 AM

Its 'Faatya' or 'Faatha' not 'Fatwa'.

Faatya or Faatha : is a Muslim prayer

Fatwa : is a legal opinion or decree handed down by an Islamic religious leader

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