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aaina mujhko dikhane aaya.
Aaina mujhko dikhane aaya har koii dil ko jalane aaya.. kaam kuch dost naya kar jata tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya. baaNt na paya khushi jo meri gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya. kah ke apna jo gale milta hai teer vo dil pe chalane aaya. har kadam phool sajata tha jo raah mein khaar bichhane aaya. dhadkane fir se huyi bekabu kon ye mujhko satane aaya. kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya. |
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Madhu Bala....aap to bahut acchi shayra hai ji...hame aapki yeh gazal bahut acchi lgi, sabhi sher bahut acche bane hai par yeh aik sher dil ke bahuttttttttt kareeb rha: kah ke apna jo gale milta hai teer vo dil pe chalane aaya. khush rho yu hi likhti rho pyar aur duaoN ke saath dii :) |
Madhu jee
Namaste Dard ko ba khoobee se bayaan kartee aapki yeh peshkash pasand aayii... likhte rahiye aage bhee.. dil se daad Aapka Dhaval |
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Kya baat hai Madhu jee bahut hi sundar rahi aapki yeh ghazal likhti rahen duaon ke saath |
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waah waahh madhu ji kyaa baat hai nihaaytee khoobsurat ghazal aapne bazm ko nazar kii ha is baar bhii ke iskaa lafz lafz apne dardon ko bakhubii bayaan kar rahaa hai...... jitnee bhii tareeff kii jaae kam hai is aafreen kalaam ki shaan me........ aatee rahiye, likhtii rahiye aur apne kalaam se bazm ko roshan kartii rahye........ shaad..... |
Madhu tumhari tareef Mein lafz kam pad rahe hain aajkal.
Bhagwaan kare tum aise hi khoobsoorti se likhti raho aur Hum wah wah karte thak jaaein. Kya kahun... Maza as jata hai. Aur pata nahi kyun tumse mili nahi magar tumhare likhe Mein mujhe apna aks nazar aata hai. |
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Yunhi dil lubhaate rahiye aur bazm mein aachi achi ghazalein laate rahiYe |
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Saada lafzon me khoobsurat ravaani ke saath sundar ehsaas piroye han aapne. Mujhe ehsaas mr saadgi bahut pasand hai aur aapki rachna me woh chhalak rahi hai. Yeh do sher khaas bahut acche lage: kaam kuch dost naya kar jata tu bhi rasmoN ko nibhane aaya. baaNt na paya khushi jo meri gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya Waah! Meri dil se dheron daad, likhti rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye. |
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Bohot khoob Madhu ji Waaaaah.....aapki ye peshkash bhi khoob rahi Daad kubul farmaiyega Aapka apna Bhushan |
Madhu Ji
Qaafiya / Radeef AchChhe Se Nibhaane Ki Koshish AchChhi Lagi Khayaal Bhi Khoob Nikaale HaiN Kaamiyaab Ghazal Huii ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!! |
Madhu ji bahaut khoob likha hai aapne...I am a fan of your writing...yeh lines kuch jyada hi pasand aayin...
baaNt na paya khushi jo meri gam me vo pyaar jatane aaya. kal madhu jo tere gam sahta tha aaj vo shakhs rulane aaya. Aise hi likhti rahiye...khayal rakhiye. |
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shukriya di...jo ghazal pasand aayi aapko...bas aap sab ka sath milta rahe to ye khyaal yoon hee nagme ban ke pesh hote rahenge.....:) aati rahiyega.. takecare love n regards aapki madhubala |
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Padhte rahiyega....koshish jari rahegi.... Khush rahein.. |
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asha karti hoon aapka sath aage bhi milta rahega........ |
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Bahut shukriya apki inayaton ka.....Aate rahiyega... Salamat rahein... |
WAAAAAAAAH.......
Bohat khoob |
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Khyaal rakhiye aut likhte rahiye yun hi.. Aapka dost Kunaal |
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behtareen peshkash ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!! |
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Apki tawajjo ka behad shukriya... Hamesha khush raho....:) Madhu... |
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Yun hee sath dete rahiyega koshish karti rahoongi likhne ki...... |
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Aage bhi koshish karti rahoongi.. Sath dete rahiyega... Takecare.. Madhu. |
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Aate rahiyega... Take care Madhu |
कौन खरीदेगा अब हीरों के दाम में तुम्हारें आँसू,
वो जो दर्द का सौदागर था मोहब्बत छोड़ दी उसने. Very nice madhu jeee.... |
acchi Ghazal hi hui hai Madhu jee
mubarakbaad taleem kijiye Allah kare zor-e-Qalam, aur ziyaada rab raakha maikash |
Bohat achchi Ghazal Madhu ji.
Likhti rahiye Khaksaar Praveen |
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Aap jaisi shakhshiyat se daad hasil hona..khushi ki baat hai... Khayaalon aur ghazal ko tawajjo dene ka dil se shukriya.... Aate rahiyega.. Regards.. Madhu. |
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Shukriya pasand karne ka.... Takecare Madhu. |
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nawazish ka behad shukriya.. aate rahiyega... takecare madhu. |
kya baat hai madhu dil ke aas paas hai har sher tumhe padhnaa sunanaa dono achhaa lagataa hai
sheesha bhale dikhaa ke jataa khud se mujhe milaa ke jataa khush raho |
Madhu ji
Bahut din baad shayri.com par aana hua.Bahut acha laga yeh rachna parh.Keep up the good work.Dua karungi kabhi koyi aapke liye khar na bichaye aur na rulaye.Sada kush rahein. |
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Dil se shukriya praveen ji...... Aapki daad pakar khushi huyi..... Aate rahiyega..... Regards Madhu.. |
Kya khoob likhi hain madhu ji.
Main to join karne se isko apne frnd circle share bhi kiya tha aur sab ne aap.ke taarif kiye the. |
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Bahut shukriya hausla afzai ka.... Aate rahiyega.. Madhu.. |
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daad hazir hai qubuul kijiyega.... khaksaar, mastt |
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Aapki pyari si dua ke liye bhi dil se shukriya..... Apna khayaal rakhiyega... Madhu. |
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Jinse aapne mera kalaam share kiya aur unhe pasand aaya sabhi ko shukriya kahiyega.. Aate rahein... |
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Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya.. Ummeed hai aage bhi apka sath milega.. Aate rahein... Madhu |
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