*main aapko bahut pyar karti hoon.*
 

doston.
Purane dino ko yaad karke maine ye rachan likhi hai. aapke sujhav jaroor digiyega.
dilip

Ek baras beet gaya
parantu,hum aaj bhee
aapke man ko pad na sake
man me aapke parti,
saccha pyar sanjone ke baad
hamare pyar ki ek konpal niklane ke baad,
apne aap ko aapke prati
poornat samparpit karne ke baad bhee
main nahi samajh paya
ki kya tum khush ho
Itna nadan to main kabhi na tha
or itna samarpit bhee kabhi nahi
shayad,
tumhare prati mera samarpan hee
meri nadani ka karan hai,
chalo tumhari hee baat per viswas kar lete hain.
ki
" main aapko bahut pyar karti hoon."

dilip

Re: *main aapko bahut pyar karti hoon.*
 

good one...!

shukriya didi

dilip

dilip aaj esko phir se padney ke baad samaj paye hu mai.n ki yeh tumne kis ke liye likha tha. i m sure, this for u r mamata. m i right.

hi
 

dilip bhai ko raj ka pyaar bhara namaskaar......appki kavita parhi bhut gehre ehsaas hai....dil pe dastak c huie.....bhut acha likha hai or jiyada mehnat karo...apna khyaal rakhna.....raj.....

ji di bilkul thik kaha aapne maine ye usi ke liye likha hai

Dilip saheb namaskaar....aapki nazm parhi our bahoot achha laga....aapne apne toh ahsaasat batla diye...shayad woh kya kehna chahe....uska kya.....bahoot hi sunder nazm dost....


Tumhare prati mera samarpan hi meri nadaani....dil ko choo sa gaya....

lekin iske jawaab mein main kutchh likhne ki Gustaakhi chahoonga...

Kyuin karein gila unki be-wazeh judayi ka
kutchh toh mile sila hamein apni is wafayii ka.


Harash

mere dost dilip

kaise ho janab


aapki kavita pasand aayi mere dost aur sister ne jo kaha wo samjh me nahi aaya jo dusre jawab me kaha wo
"mamta"???????:) :) :) :)

aur is peshkas ke liye dil se daad kubul kijiyenga janaab

aapka shaitaan
dhaval

janab raj sahab namaskar
meri is choti si kavita ne aapke dil per dastak di meri ye kavita sharthak ho gayi......shukriya aapka jo aapne ise pasand kiya ese hi aage bhi apni nazare.n inayat karte rahiye ga
aapka dost
dilip

ji harsha sahab
meri likhi nazam ki koi line aapke dil ko choo gayi main aapka dil se kayal ho gaya......... wakai aapki is tarif se mujhe aage likhen ka housla mila hai
shukriya aapka
dilip

dhaval mere bhai
jyada dimag per zor mat daal mere yaar
mamta or koi nahi tumhari bhabhi hai yaar
or tumhari daad ke liye shukriya mere yaar

ese hi aate rahna

bye
dilip

haye allaah kya jamana aa gaya.......apko dekhke humesha ek hi gana yaad ata hai......dekh tere sansaar ki halat kya ho gai bhagvaan kitna badal gaya insaan............aapko yaad hai meine apse bhaaaaaaaaaa bol dun kya..........bol deti hu......bhaabhi ke liye kuch likhne ko kaha thha apne kaha sochunga..........bada mushkil kaam hai..........lekin mujhe to khabar aaj hi lagi ki aap to pahale hi meri bhabhi ke liye kalaam likh chuke hai.....unko batana parega.........:) ;)

aur jara dhaval ke reply pe nazar dalna......:D :p .....mamta??????.......hmmmm
aur ek baat to bata dhakkan(sorry) aap ek to dost bolte ho aur iss dost ki koi khoj khabar bhi nahi lete ki jinda hai yaa tappak gai............yaar ate ho chale jate ho pata hi nahi chalta............ek pm hi kar diya karo......warna..........:mad: samajh rahe ho na meri dhamki...........haaaa....ainda khayal rakhna iss baat ka samjhe..............hahahaha
ok bahot pakaa diya aaj apko...........aaj haath lage ho isi liye..........waise meeta ji(mamta)ko to mein bataungi hi ye sab.........waise unke liye hi likha hai na....hmmmmmmmmmm........

sach kahun to ye kalaam bahot hi sundar laga mujhe............
be happy yaar

bye

grazie

aapki dost
pooja

yaar dhaval aap bhi kam nahi ho khichai karne me...........mein dhakkan(dilip ji ko mein pyaar se dhakkan bolti hu) ko apse kam time hua jante hue lekin fir bhi mujhe pata hai ki meeta aur mamta ek hi hai..............abe............kuch bolu na to basss...........waise aap dono ke kaan khinchne me bahot maza ata hai mujhe......:p :D

shukriya miss basanti accha laga aapko yahan pakar
per jara sa darwaza khatkhatka ke aaya karo yaaaaar
achcha nahi lagta

chalo bye apna khyal rakhana basanti

jalsi aao main intzar kar raha hoo.n
swagat ke liye taiyar baitha hoo.n
ok