Apane Haathon Kii Lakiiron Mein-Qateel Shifai
 

Qateel Shifai sahab ki ek bahaut behetreen nazm aap sabhi ke beech laayi hoon
umeed hai aapko bhi yeh pasand ayegi....
meri pasandeeda nazm hai yeh.
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apane haathon kii lakiiron mein basaale mujhako
main huun teraa nasiib apanaa banaa le mujhako

mujhase tuu puuchhane aayaa hai vafaa ke maanii
ye terii sadaadilii maar na Daale mujhako

main samandar bhii huun motii bhii huun Gotaazan bhii
koii bhii naam meraa leke bulaale mujhako

tuune dekhaa nahiin aaiine se aage kuchh bhii
Khudaparastii mein kahiin tuu na ganvaale mujhako

kal kii baat aur hai main ab saa rahuun yaa na rahuun
jitanaa jii chaahe teraa aaj sataale mujhako

Khud ko main baant na Daaluun kahiin daaman-daaman
kar diyaa tuune agar mere havaale mujhako

main jo kaantaa huun to chal mujh se bachaakar daaman
main huun gar phuul to juude mein sajaale mujhako

main khule dar ke kisii ghar kaa huun saamaan pyaare
tuu dabe paanv kabhii aake churaale mujhako

tark-e-ulfat kii qasam bhii koii hotii hai qasam
tuu kabhii yaad to kar bhuulanevaale mujhako

baadaa phir baadaa hai main zahar bhii pii jaauun "Qateel"
shart ye hai koii baahon mein sambhale mujhako

franky 4 u
 

farhana ye nazm mujhe behad pasand aai... dil ko choo liya is nazm ne... aage bhi ese nazm hamare sath sare karna dil khush ho jata hai.....

dil ke dhadkan ruk jaati hai meree
jab tu koi nazm pesh karti hai zaalim

qtal karna hai to ek baar mai kar de mujhko
kyu reh reh kar mera qtal karti hai zaalim!

*ek tuta hua dil*


farukh......

hmmmm mujhe khushi hui jaanke ke aapko yeh nazm pasand aayi hai..inshallah zaroor koshish rahegi ke aage bhi nazm share karti rahoon....
aur haan aapne apne sher me mujhe zalim kyun bulaya hai:(
hmm mein zalim nahi hoon...sab toh mujhe kehte hain ke mein sweet hoon....hmmmm anywaz just kidding,,,,
aapka sher mujhe pasand aaya....:)
take care...bye

franky 4 u
 

Gawara na hua mera unhai zalim kehna
par jisnai kaql kiya mere sukoon ka use kya kahenge...?

tadpe hum umar bhar kisi ki chah mai
us tadap ko badane wale tu he bata ....?
ab hum tujhe kya kahenge!


*ek tuta hua dil*

farukh....

hmmmmmm:)

kya baat hai
 

yakeenan dil ko choo jane wali hai yeh nazm........bahoot hi haseen aur pyaari hai.....kya kehnaa.......
buss likh te rahiye aise hi taaki hum jaise pathar dil ko bhi shayad koi pyar kar ne wala mil jaaye.......

hi ayaan...mujhe khushi hui jaanke ke tumhe bhi yeh nazm pasand hai...aur haan ek aur baat..mujhe toh tum patthar dil nahi lagte ho par haan tum question mark zaroor ho;)
inshallah aapko bhi zaroor koi na koi soni kudi zaroor mil jayegi.

hey
 

thanx....yr rite m a QUETION mark...!
kya pata kab aaegi SONI KUDI...naseeb me nai hai,warna abhi tak aageyee hoti:((

I like it soooooooo much thanks for sharing it