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subha 16th August 2008 10:15 PM

bachpan ky din
 
Bachpan k din bhi kitnay achay hotay thay
tab to sirf khilonay toota kartay thay

Wo khushiyaan bhi janay kaisi khushiyan theen
titli k par nooch k uchla kartay thay.

Paaon mar k baarish k pani mein
apni naao aap daboya kartay thay
chotay thay to makr-o-fariab bhi chotay thay
dana daal k chiryaan pakra kartay thay

apnay jaal janay k bhi ahsaas na tha
jaltay howay sholon ko pakra kartay thay

khushboo k urtay hi kyun murjhaya phool
kitnay bhoolay pan sai socha kartay thay

ab sochein to chot si parti hai dil par
aap bana kar app gharonday tora kartay thay

Aksar wo taabeerein lahoo rulati hein
bachpan mein jo hum nai sapnay daikhay thay

ab to ik aansoo bhi ruswa kar jata hai
bachpan mein jii bhar k ro to laitay thay.

faraz alam 18th August 2008 06:46 PM

hi miss subha
yun
to aap ki poore kaveta bhaut khubsurat hai, magar last ke line,
ab to ek aansoo bhi ruswa kar jata hi
bachpan mein jee bhar k ro to laitay thay

dr.raj 18th August 2008 07:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by subha (Post 303873)
Bachpan k din bhi kitnay achay hotay thay
tab to sirf khilonay toota kartay thay

Wo khushiyaan bhi janay kaisi khushiyan theen
titli k par nooch k uchla kartay thay.

Paaon mar k baarish k pani mein
apni naao aap daboya kartay thay
chotay thay to makr-o-fariab bhi chotay thay
dana daal k chiryaan pakra kartay thay

apnay jaal janay k bhi ahsaas na tha
jaltay howay sholon ko pakra kartay thay

khushboo k urtay hi kyun murjhaya phool
kitnay bhoolay pan sai socha kartay thay

ab sochein to chot si parti hai dil par
aap bana kar app gharonday tora kartay thay

Aksar wo taabeerein lahoo rulati hein
bachpan mein jo hum nai sapnay daikhay thay

ab to ik aansoo bhi ruswa kar jata hai
bachpan mein jii bhar k ro to laitay thay.


khubsoorat ehsaas hai aapke.....bachpan ki yaad dila di.....
likhte rahiye.....aapki shayri ka intzaar rahega....
khush rahiye....


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