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ek_tuta_hua_dil 23rd July 2006 09:25 PM

Jhuki Jo Palke To Chubhengi Aapko
 
AAJ BAHUT DINO K BAAD SAMAY MILA TO KUCH LIKHNE KI KOSIS KI HAIN SHAYAD AAPKO PASAND AAYE OR AGAR NA PASAND AAYE TO AAPKA SAMAY BARBAAD KARNE K LIYE SHAMA CHAHTA HOUN...








YADOON K IS BHAWAR MAIN EK PAL MERA H0.
FULO K ISH CHAMAN MAIN EK GUL MERA HO.
KHUDA KARE JAB AAP YAAD KARO APNO KO.
TO UN APNO MAIN EK NAAM MERA HO.
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WO NADIYA NAHI AANSU THEY MERE.
JIS PAR WO KASTI CHALATE RAHE.
MANJIL MILE UNHE YEH DUAA THI HAMARI.
ISHLIYE HUM AANSU BAHATE RAHE.
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AAJ DOOR SE HE KOI SALAM KAR GAYA.
AAPNI YAADO KA GULAAM KAR GAYA.
APNI JINDAGI GIRVI RAKH KAR KHARIDA THA JISSEY.
AAJ HE WO HAMARI KHUSIYA NILAAM KAR GAYA.
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NAZAR ANDAAJ KAISE KARE UNKO.
NAJRO MAIN BHITHAYA HAIN UNKO.
YAAD AANE PAR ROYE BHI TO KAISE.
DARTE HAIN JHUKI JO PALKE TO CHUBHENGI UNKO.
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BYE FNDS
UR MONTI

pooja_d 24th July 2006 01:43 AM

hi
 
monti ji aapki ye sabhi shayriya bahot hi jyada achhi aur dard bhari hai.

aapki dost
pooja


khamoshi kyu hai in aahaton mein,
bewaffai kyu hai teri chahaton mein.....................

zubi_khan 24th July 2006 05:33 PM

frd
 
hi
aapki shayri bahot hi acchi hai sach bohat dard hai ismein

akelijaan 24th July 2006 06:56 PM

monti ji,
pehli baar padha aapko,acha likha hai aapne.yeh do rubaai pasand aayi bahut.

WO NADIYA NAHI AANSU THEY MERE.
JIS PAR WO KASTI CHALATE RAHE.
MANJIL MILE UNHE YEH DUAA THI HAMARI.
ISHLIYE HUM AANSU BAHATE RAHE.


NAZAR ANDAAJ KAISE KARE UNKO.
NAJRO MAIN BHITHAYA HAIN UNKO.
YAAD AANE PAR ROYE BHI TO KAISE.
DARTE HAIN JHUKI JO PALKE TO CHUBHENGI UNKO.

likhte rahiye yunhin

ek_tuta_hua_dil 26th July 2006 09:18 PM

hi poja
 
mana ki mere msg bahut acche hain or dard bhare bhi hain laki aapko kyun acche lage
maine aapke purane msgs bhi pade hain wo khali romantice hote hain

ek_tuta_hua_dil 26th July 2006 09:20 PM

hi zubi khan
 
mana ki hamari shayri bhaut acchi hain or dard bhari hain
ham to dard ka ilaag bhi rakhte hain
dubara hamse cont. karna aapke dil ka dard dr kar denge

ek_tuta_hua_dil 26th July 2006 09:23 PM

2 akeli jaan
 
aab dur naahi hum aapse
hi
this is monti the
play boy


play boy
means
the dj play boy

Pulkit_gupta 26th July 2006 09:26 PM

Hi monti,

Shers are really nice... but I think I've read them sonewhere... please mention not mine below the ones not written by you.... keep coming...

pooja_d 26th July 2006 11:18 PM

hi monty ji
 
haa meine jitne bhi msg kiye hai sabhi jyada tar romentice thhe.lekin jo log romentice hote hai kya unhe dard nahi???? unhe jyada dard hota hai jab unka dil tutatha hai tab.

ek aur baat jo chiz achhi hoti hai usko achha kahne me kya burai hai.
mere dil me bhi jo dard hai aapki shayri ne bayan kar diya.
ab aapki shayri dard bhari hai sukoon milta hai padh kar.

aapki dost
pooja

ek_tuta_hua_dil 27th July 2006 09:30 PM

dear pulkit
 
maine thought likhe hain .com main
maine yeh to nahi likha ki yeh maine likhe hain
or pls dont mine ki jarurat nahi hain
hamey lagta hain ki yeh s.com main hona chahiye to ham le aate hain

ok clear
bye

urs etud

ek_tuta_hua_dil 27th July 2006 09:34 PM

2 dear poojaa
 
chahe insaan roma..... ho ya un roma.......
chahe comm...... ho yaa uncomm......
aisa kon hain jo dard se waakif nahi hain dil main sabke he dard hain lakin alag alag roop main ok

n
bye the way
aapko dubara apni post par dekh kar acccha laga
aate rahna

aapka dost
monti

Pulkit_gupta 28th July 2006 03:03 PM

"Not Mine" ki zaroorat to hai... aap naye hain isliye maine yaad dilaa diya... varna moderators yaad dilayenge...

koi to ho 28th July 2006 09:06 PM

WO NADIYA NAHI AANSU THEY MERE.
JIS PAR WO KASTI CHALATE RAHE.
MANJIL MILE UNHE YEH DUAA THI HAMARI.
ISHLIYE HUM AANSU BAHATE RAHE.


wah wah really very nice keep writing:)

ek_tuta_hua_dil 29th July 2006 09:48 PM

hi dear pulkit g
 
kya naam badal lene se bande ki pahchaan bni badal jaati hain kya.
yaar main aapki s.com ka 3 saal purana dost houn.
or main aapne purane naam se boor ho chuka hounb
ish liye naye naam se aapke saamne pesh hua houn

baaki aap guess kar lo ki kon hain jo 3 saal se aapke saath tha or aab gum ho chuka hain s.com se
ok u carry on
bye

ek_tuta_hua_dil 29th July 2006 09:54 PM

2 koi to hai
 
mana ki koi to hain

magar kon hain wo

bikhar kar gir gaya dil mera

kam se kam pata to chale

kon hain wo.............





hi
bahut khushi hue aapko aapni post per dekh kar
ummed hain fir mulakaat hoge

bye

ur
monti

Pulkit_gupta 30th July 2006 01:06 PM

Hmmm.... I think i know you now...

Puraane ho to tumhe yahaan ke rules pat hone chaahiye... Pehle bhi kaha tha... sirf NM likhne se izzat kam nahi hoti... Pehle to samajh liya thha tumne....

neways... take care...

ek_tuta_hua_dil 31st July 2006 09:39 PM

2 pulkit gee
 
thanks

koi to hain jisne hamey guss kar k pahchaan liya

lakin thodi c kami rah gaye
mera naam nahi liya

232653 6th August 2006 09:49 PM

hi
 
hi
monti jee
this is 232653

aapko pada to aankho se aansu nikal aaye
nice
aise he lagey raho .

ek_tuta_hua_dil 10th August 2006 09:17 PM

2 232653
 
yeh .com or ish .com main likhne wale logo ke aansu rokne k liye likhte hain m sorry jo meri wajha se aapki aankho main aansu aaye

aapka
monti


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