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naresh_mehra110 12th October 2015 11:18 PM

Nazm : Shaam Hone Tak
 
Ek Halki Phulki NAZM ...

Shaam Hone Tak
Tum
Rukaa Karo

Waqt Tumhare Paas Hai Naa
Waqt Mere Paas

Hisaab Se
Mili Hai Zindagi
Koi Hissaa
Mere Liye
Chunaa Karo

Raaste MeN Tum KhaDhe Ho Naa
MaiN KhaDhaa HooN

RaastoN Ko Tum
Kinaare Kinaare
Chalne
Diyaa Karo

Ghar Se Tum Nikle Ho Naa
MaiN Niklaa HooN

SaNkoch Ki
Shiqan Ko Tum
Maathe Se
ThoDha
Hal'kaa Karo

Ab Saamnaa Ho Hi Gaya Hai
Jab Tumhara Mujh Se

Khaamosh
HoNt Hai Toh Kyaa
AankhoN Se Baat
Kiyaa Karo

---- Naresh Mehra ----

Madhu 14 13th October 2015 09:52 AM


Hisaab Se
Mili Hai Zindagi
Koi Hissaa
Mere Liye
Chunaa Karo


Namaskaar naresh ji...

Bahut khoob...nazm pesh ki hai....

Aate rahiye...
Apna khayaal rakhein..
Reagards..

Hamdam 13th October 2015 09:27 PM

Naresh ji ....kafi arse ke baad apko.perne ka mauka mila..

Bahut khoobsoorat nazm.rahi.aapki...

Khamosh ankhoN se baateiN kiya karo...waah ..

Abhi ek ghzal sun raha tha ki..

Mohabaat ki kya koi jubaan hoti hai,
Ye tau ankhoN se bayaan hoti hai.

Sanjay Sehgal

ISHK EK IBADAT 13th October 2015 09:58 PM

bahut sundar rahi yeh nazm Naresh bhai...................

sameer'shaad' 14th October 2015 09:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 (Post 487960)
Ek Halki Phulki NAZM ...

Shaam Hone Tak
Tum
Rukaa Karo

Waqt Tumhare Paas Hai Naa
Waqt Mere Paas

Hisaab Se
Mili Hai Zindagi
Koi Hissaa
Mere Liye
Chunaa Karo

Raaste MeN Tum KhaDhe Ho Naa
MaiN KhaDhaa HooN

RaastoN Ko Tum
Kinaare Kinaare
Chalne
Diyaa Karo

Ghar Se Tum Nikle Ho Naa
MaiN Niklaa HooN

SaNkoch Ki
Shiqan Ko Tum
Maathe Se
ThoDha
Hal'kaa Karo

Ab Saamnaa Ho Hi Gaya Hai
Jab Tumhara Mujh Se

Khaamosh
HoNt Hai Toh Kyaa
AankhoN Se Baat
Kiyaa Karo

---- Naresh Mehra ----


behad haseen aur tazatareen nazm pesh ki hai aapne Mehra saahab..... aur hamesha ki tarah gahree chaap choDne waalii rahi ye nazm har baar ki hi tarah..... aate rahiyega aur likhte rahiye...

shaad....

Qasid 14th October 2015 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110 (Post 487960)
Ek Halki Phulki NAZM ...

Shaam Hone Tak
Tum
Rukaa Karo

Waqt Tumhare Paas Hai Naa
Waqt Mere Paas

Hisaab Se
Mili Hai Zindagi
Koi Hissaa
Mere Liye
Chunaa Karo

Raaste MeN Tum KhaDhe Ho Naa
MaiN KhaDhaa HooN

RaastoN Ko Tum
Kinaare Kinaare
Chalne
Diyaa Karo

Ghar Se Tum Nikle Ho Naa
MaiN Niklaa HooN

SaNkoch Ki
Shiqan Ko Tum
Maathe Se
ThoDha
Hal'kaa Karo

Ab Saamnaa Ho Hi Gaya Hai
Jab Tumhara Mujh Se

Khaamosh
HoNt Hai Toh Kyaa
AankhoN Se Baat
Kiyaa Karo

---- Naresh Mehra ----

Naayaab se khayaal bazm mein rakhne ka behad shukriyaa Naresh sahaab bahut aacha lagaa aapki yeh nazm padhkar yunhi aate rahiYeGaa

naresh_mehra110 21st October 2015 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by madhu 14 (Post 487969)

hisaab se
mili hai zindagi
koi hissaa
mere liye
chunaa karo


namaskaar naresh ji...

Bahut khoob...nazm pesh ki hai....

Aate rahiye...
Apna khayaal rakhein..
Reagards..

bahut shukriyaah ... Madhu ji ! Inaayat !!!!!!!!!!

naresh_mehra110 27th October 2015 11:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hamdam (Post 487979)
Naresh ji ....kafi arse ke baad apko.perne ka mauka mila..

Bahut khoobsoorat nazm.rahi.aapki...

Khamosh ankhoN se baateiN kiya karo...waah ..

Abhi ek ghzal sun raha tha ki..

Mohabaat ki kya koi jubaan hoti hai,
Ye tau ankhoN se bayaan hoti hai.

Sanjay Sehgal

bahut shukriyaah ... Sanjay Ji

Nawaazish Aap Kii ..........

naresh_mehra110 14th November 2015 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT (Post 487985)
bahut sundar rahi yeh nazm Naresh bhai...................

bahut shukriyaah ... BaDhe Bhai !

Nawaazish !! Radhe Radhe !!!


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