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Rani 20th April 2003 01:14 AM

Tumhari yaadoon ki roshni
 
Anderi rahoon k is safr mein
kay jis ka unwan zindagi ai
bohat se dushwaar murhalay hein
ghamon k tareeq silsilay hain
Dhukhon se chlni hur ik khushi hai
bohat hee mushkil hai mere humdum
kuch aise raston pe tanha chulna
mgr jo mujh ko chala rahi hai
tumhari yadon ki roshni hai

Sharaabi 20th April 2003 02:52 AM

jin khoob lafzoN se aapne yeh rachna shuru ki, unse bhi khoob lafzoN ke zariye aapne iska ant kiya! bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne Rani ji..


"bohat hee mushkil hai mere humdum
kuch aise raston pe tanha chulna
mgr jo mujh ko chala rahi hai
tumhari yadon ki roshni hai"

«-- waah..

mushkil to hai zaroor, magar chalna paDta hai.. agar aap bhi meri taraH kadam rok do ge, to bas, bin sahaare ke hi manzil tak pauNchna hoga.
soch kar bataaiiye ki beete dinoN ki yaadeiN waise kya deti hai, raushnee, yah andhera?

kuch zaada kaha ho to maaf ki jiye.

taareef ke saath,
aman

Rani 20th April 2003 02:58 AM

Salaam Aman
ki app ki comment bohut nice thi.ty for reading the poem.Vo kia

hai ke andhere main yaadon roshni deti hain...

par roshni main vo hi yaadein andhera deti hain...


tc
ws
Rani


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