Kabhi Kabhi.....
 

Kuch khayaal yu bhi hote hain, jo jeevan main shayad ek hi baar milte hain......yeh kosish meri unhi khayaalo ko samarpit hain.....




Kabhi Kabhi mere Dil mai Khayaal Aate Hai Kabhi Kabhi....
Jo Tu Nahi Hoti To main Kaha Hota...
Is Sahar mai Kabhi To Us Sahar mai Bhatak Raha Hota
Sochta hu, meri zindagi ka sarmaya To tu hai
mere har talash ki manzil to tu hai,
Jo teri khawaish ko na paata to,
Na Jaane kaha kaha bhatak raha hota

Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi....
Ki yeh jo hasi hai teri... kahi pe koi gulzar khila rahi hogi
ek phool bhi mere daaman mai girta shayad
To ta-umar yu hi na tadapta rahata

Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi....
Ki yeh jo kano ki baali hain teri
Sooraj bhi inse nazre milane se darta hoga
Mere andhere sine ko jala dete agar...
To dil ko sakun mil jaata aur mahobbat ko kinara

Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hain kabhi kabhi
Ki jaise meri har soch ki soch tu hain
Mere har khayaal ki jaroorat tu hain
Jo tere khayaal meri jaroorat na bante
To umar bhar ka yeh nasha mera humnava na hota

Aur

Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain tahar jaane ko
Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain chale jaane ko
Kabhi kabhi fir bhi dil main khayal aate…………
---------TERE KHAYAAL AATE HAIN

Magar

Kabhi kabhi khayaalo main to yeh bhi khayal aate hain
Ki yeh kano ki bali, yeh hasi, yeh rukhsaar tera
Dil ka dhoka hain yaa nasiba mera…..

Very nice Bhaiya
 

Amit bhai ...

ek aisi rachna jo tasweer see bana de .. aur dil main ek sirhan paida kar de .. kavita ka isse accha udaharan kahiN mil hi nahi sakta ... aapki likhi hui is kavita main sirf gehraai hi nahi hai .. har dil ko aaina dikhaane ki kshamta nazar aati hai mujhe .. akhir main to bas koi uff bhi na keh sake .. ek muskaan hoNtoN pe rakh ke kho hi jaaye .. mujhe aapki kavita behad pasand aayi .. word play bhi accha hai akhir main ...

lekin jo baat gudiya ne yahan yaad dilaayi hai ..us aur to mera dhyaan gaya hi nahi .. bhaabhi je ko sunaai ya nahi .. agar nahi sunaai hai to suna hi dijiye .. aise mauke baar baar nahi milte .. mujhe yakeen hai wo iske sunne ke baad apne aapko rok nahi sakengi .. apni bhaavnatak jazbaatoN ko ...

meri tareef kabool kijiye aur aate rahiye .. aapka intzaar rehta hai ...

Kunaal

Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi....
Ki yeh jo hasi hai teri... kahi pe koi gulzar khila rahi hogi
ek phool bhi mere daaman mai girta shayad
To ta-umar yu hi na tadapta rahata

Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi....
Ki yeh jo kano ki baali hain teri
Sooraj bhi inse nazre milane se darta hoga
Mere andhere sine ko jala dete agar...
To dil ko sakun mil jaata aur mahobbat ko kinara

Amit Ji.....Bahut maasoom si panktiya aur dil ko chhu gai....very impressive...very touching......very romantic........nice creation....dil se daad hazir hai........yunhi behtar rachnaaoN ke saath aate rahiye...khush raheN....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....

parwazz bhai,

aadab.....aapko jo pasand aaye mere khayaal to maano mere khayaalo ko nayi pehchaan mil gayi....
dhnyavad aapka

gudiya.
aapka hukum sar aankho pe.....hukum ki taamil hogi:)

tumko pasand aaye mere khyaal accha laga mujhe.......

khush rahiye

kunaal bhai,
shukriya aapka jo meri adnaa si kosish aapko pasand aayi......ab aapne permission de hi di hain to yeh jurrat bhi kar hi doonga.....:)....aapke chere pe mere kaaran agar muskaan aa gayi hain to mera likhna safal hua....

duao main yaad rakhenge (aur vaise bhi!!!) yehi aasha hain...............

shabba khair

nareshji,

ji shukriya aapka dher saara jo aapne mere shabdo ko saraaha.....payaase ko kya chahiye....do boond paani....aapne to ganga-jal pila diya......
kosish karoonga ki masoomiyat rakh pau apne khayaalo main....fir aage ka pata nahi.........
aapki nazro ne jo iniyaat kari hain mere khaak shabdo pe uska main shukrguzaar rahoonga.....
aise hi sabko bhadava dete rahe.....

dhnyavad

dhnyavad zainyji.....

aapko mere yeh khyaal pasand aaye....

Amit jee, namaste!

Aapke khayalon ke khayaal humein bahut khoobsoorat lage!

Hamarii mubarakbaad aur shubhkamnaein kubuul keejiye!

Aur bhi parhne ke mauke deejiyega.:)

Mann

Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain tahar jaane ko
Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain chale jaane ko
Kabhi kabhi fir bhi dil main khayal aate…………
---------TERE KHAYAAL AATE HAIN

Magar

Kabhi kabhi khayaalo main to yeh bhi khayal aate hain
Ki yeh kano ki bali, yeh hasi, yeh rukhsaar tera
Dil ka dhoka hain yaa nasiba mera…..

Very sweet lines amit ji...
daad kubul keejiye..

take care..

amit da....

ek sirhan si paida ho gayee aur ek tees ne dil ke dard ko ubhaar diya, kuchh nasha sa hai aapki is nazm meiN...paana, paa kar khona....ya bina mile hi paa lena....ye aise ehsaas haiN ki kabhi to in meiN umroN ka safar yuN kat jaye aur pata bhi na chale, to kabhi ek pal bhi aisa bojhil ho jaye ki usme hi duniyaa simat jaye...aapki is rachna ki tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi haiN mere paas….likhte rahiye….

aapka…

thanks for coming and appreciating
 

diyaji,
gar aapko accha laga to meri mehnat safal hui....

aapke aane se, jaise maine pehle bi kaha tha mehfil main raunak rehti hain....aaya kijye aur khoob aaya kijiye......

aap hamari yeh choti si guzarish to rakh hi sakti hain......

PS: aar saun,"choo gayi" hobe naa..."choo gaye" hobe.....coaching classes niye ne aamar theke.:D:D

Bhalo thaak :)

mannji,

dhnyavad aapka jo aapne hamare khayalo ko itni tawazzo di.....aapki mubarakbaad aur shubhkamnaye sar maathe......
aapke saath ki hamesha jaroorat raheti hain....aage bhi saath banaye rakhe

shipraji,
thanks for your appreciation and support....

aapki daad dil se kabool hain...........

dhnyavad

bhai,

aap aate hain meri kisi bhi kosish pe to dil ko sakun milta hain....kuch baate bina bole hi samjh le......

aapka

time ta bole dao aami same time tuition ta niye nobo :)
kintu aapni to rati 2 to samaye aasen aami to ghumie padi :(
ki kari bolo toh...?