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your_first_love 30th August 2003 01:54 PM

teri yaad aayi
 
raat hui jab shaam ke baad..
teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad..
humne khamosh rehkar bhi dekha..
teri aawaaz aayi har saans ke baad.



kabir.

Rashid Hayat 30th August 2003 06:10 PM

Bahut Hi Durust farmaya
 
Very explicitly addressed,

Each line had its own pain and each line is filled with its own love

manoj kureel 30th August 2003 06:25 PM

Re: teri yaad aayi
 
humne khamosh rehkar bhi dekha..
teri aawaaz aayi har saans ke baad.


wah....bahot khoob....jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai.....bahot gehrai hai is sher mein....keep it up..

-Manoj

Shimul 1st September 2003 07:24 AM

Kabir Jee, Aapa yeh ahsaash achha laga. Achha likhte hein aap.
Thanks. Likhte rahiyega. Take care.
God bless.
Shimul.


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