aap mein vo baat thi
 

kahan kisi aur kee itni aukaat thi
aapne katl kiya, aap mein vo baat thi

aap hee to jaanti dil kee ek ek baat thi
aapne chot dee,aap mein vo baat thi

aap the saath to jindagi bhi saath thi
aapne chood diya, aap mein vo baat thi

humne diya dil sambhaal kar rakhne kee baat thi
aapne tod diya ,aap mein vo baat thi

aap kahe to din aap kahe to raat thi
aapne kaha raat,aap mein vo baat thi

jalta tha pyaar ka chiraag roshne bhi saath thi
aapne bujha diya ,aap mein vo baat thi

do kadam chale the ,aur do kadam kee baat thi
aapne badali raah,aap mein vo baat thi

kadamon mein aapke mere dil meri saugaat thi
aapne kuchal diya ,aap mein vo baat thi

aru ji buhut acha laga parrh ker "aap main woh baat thi"

aap hee to jaanti dil kee ek ek baat thi
aapne chot dee,aap mein vo baat thi

ye sher buhut hi acha laga keep it up

thanx moona jee ,aapko aaacha laga jaankar khushi huee, aise hee haunsla afzai karterahiye ,
thx once more

waah !
kyaa baat kahi hai....

dil ko choo gayi.
bahut badhiya arvind ji.... bahut hi badhiya.

ghazal ka matla khas taur pe pasand aaya.

aap ne katl kiyaa... aap me woh baat thi...
subhaan allah.

Regards,
Ziyaad.

thanx ziyaad jee, aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya. Sorry for late reply.

Arvindji....

Beautifully expressed...... real facts when someone is truly in luv......
Bahut achi lagi... thanks for sharing.....

I really liked ur custom lines "uske liye vo jindagi ke kuch pal the
mere liye vo kuch pal hee jindagi the".

aru ji good lines.. keep writing :)!!

aap hee to jaanti dil kee ek ek baat thi
aapne chot dee,aap mein vo baat thi

Thanx ruchika jee, aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya. Also thanx for liking my signature.

Thanx, richa jee, apne aru ko pada uske liye shukriya. Aise hee padte rahiye aur reply karte rahiye.

bahut khoob ji koi baat to hai khush rahain aise hi likhte rahain
................................................

very nice aru ji................................................ ...............

salaam aru saheb,


kahan kisi aur kee itni aukaat thi
aapne katl kiya, aap mein vo baat thi


yeh lines bahut khub... umdaa kalam ... umeed hai aap aise hi likhte rahe...

yun toh raho main aksar dost mil jaya karte hai,
har dost aise joh ghum se saath diyaa karte hai...

Arvindji....

Bahut achi lines hai ...har pankti ka arth dil ko chu dene wala hain.Aise hi likhte rahiye :)

Aapki dost,
Saloni

Thanx rashmi jee.
Aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya.

Wah!.....bohat khoob arvind ji.....

Baat baat me bohat kuch keh diya aapne....kya baat hai.....:-)

Thanx a lot loveleen jee...................,...,

very nice Arvind bhai.................................... :)

Thanx ahsaan bhai, aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya....

Thanx saloni jee,........................

Do kadam saath chale aur do kadam ki baat thi ,
aapne badli rah ,aap mein.vo baat thi.

Arvind ji kya kahun ...apka dard mehsoos kar raha hun ...

Teer gahra laga hai mere see mein kabhi ,
lahu bhi tapka nahi per zigar chalni ho.gaya.

kuch aisa hi laga mujhe aapke kalaam ko per ke ..

yun kab tak bewajah rulaoge is kadar humko ,
ab tau hichkiyon ne siskiyon ka saath chor diya hai.

Sanjay Sehgal

Arvindjee,
bahot hi khub qalaam hai........... Dil se daad qbul kariye...............

thanx zainy jee.........sorry for late reply.....................ab aap jaldi se sdc rejoin kariye.....

thanx a lot shoiab bhai................................

thanx a lot sanjay g .................................................. ....

OTE=aadeil;458191]Arvindjee,
bahot hi khub qalaam hai........... Dil se daad qbul kariye...............[/QUOTE]

Thanx aadil jee...................................