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ek_wafa 12th April 2006 10:51 AM

Hua Kya Hai
 
Maut bhi humiko mili bata ye Saza kya hai
Chhupa hai jo Raaz ismein wo Chhupa kya hai

Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai

Diya jalakar meri Rooh ko behlate ho tum
Abb nahin hoon Main ismein Shuba kya hai

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai

KunaaL 12th April 2006 01:51 PM

Wafa ji ...

Ek arse ke baad aapko dekha hai .. jo chand julme aapki kalam se kabhi padhe the maine aaj bhi yaad hai.. geele pani se buna fasana ...

khair aaj aapko dekha bohat accha laga ... aur bohat kamaal likha hai aapne .. dard ki inteha sa laga .... likhti raha kariye yuN hi ...

aapka apna

Kunal

Pulkit_gupta 12th April 2006 02:25 PM

Maut bhi humiko mili bata ye Saza kya hai
Chhupa hai jo Raaz ismein wo Chhupa kya hai

Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

waaaahhh... khoobsurat aashaar


Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai

Diya jalakar meri Rooh ko behlate ho tum
Abb nahin hoon Main ismein Shuba kya hai

kya baat hai...


Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai

waaaaaaaaahhh...

Wafa,

bahut hi khoobsurat aashaar pesh kiye hain aapne.. dard se bhare magar behada asaraar.. meri daad kubool kijiyega... likhti rahiye...

ek_wafa 13th April 2006 08:39 PM

Kunal

shukriya kalaam par gaur karne ke liye
aur mera kalaam aapko yaad raha...mujhe hairat hui
jab takk dard hai tab takk main yahan aati rahungi..likhti rahungi
shukriya
apna khayal rakhiyega




Pulkit

bahut shukriya yahan aane ke liye...aapki daad kabool hai
shukriya
apna khayal rakhiyega

talib 15th April 2006 07:33 PM

Wafaa sahibaa adaab..

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai.


Bohot khoobsurat sher arz kiyaa hai aapne, maut pe hasnewaaloN ka mijaaz payaa hai aapne shayad aur aap ki yeh zindaadili iss sher se saaf zaahir hai..likhte rahiye..apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa.. Dua Go.

Taish 15th April 2006 09:04 PM

wafa ji bahut dino ke baad site pe aapko aur yakeen maaniye bahut dino baad kuch itna ahcha v padha hai.bahut khushi hui aapko padh kar.bas guzarish yahi hai ki yunhi likhti rahiye aap.

ek_wafa 20th April 2006 01:02 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by talib
Wafaa sahibaa adaab..

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai.


Bohot khoobsurat sher arz kiyaa hai aapne, maut pe hasnewaaloN ka mijaaz payaa hai aapne shayad aur aap ki yeh zindaadili iss sher se saaf zaahir hai..likhte rahiye..apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa.. Dua Go.



Talib ji

aapne mere kalaam ko apna waqt diya...bahut bahut shukriya.
maut si zindagi ya zindagi si maut....pata nahin maut par hans rahi hoon ya apni zindagi par.

aap yahan aaye...mera hausla badha...shukriya

jab takk dard rahega...wafa likhti rahegi

apna khayal rakhiyega

ek_wafa 21st April 2006 01:19 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
wafa ji bahut dino ke baad site pe aapko aur yakeen maaniye bahut dino baad kuch itna ahcha v padha hai.bahut khushi hui aapko padh kar.bas guzarish yahi hai ki yunhi likhti rahiye aap.

Ghayal ji

aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya..shukriya.

aapse bhi yahi kahoongi..jab takk dard rahega wafa likhti rahegi

apna khayal rakhiyega

Aman_rahi 21st April 2006 07:49 PM

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai


Wafa ji.............

arz-e-sher bahut khoobsurat hai..............dard ke saath maut pe bhi hansne ki ada paayi hai aapne............

Ghulam ali sahab ka ek sher yaad aaya..........

"mar mar kar jeena choor diya
lo humne peena choor diya "


yunhi likhte rahiyega...............

ek_wafa 23rd April 2006 02:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Aman_rahi
Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai


Wafa ji.............

arz-e-sher bahut khoobsurat hai..............dard ke saath maut pe bhi hansne ki ada paayi hai aapne............

Ghulam ali sahab ka ek sher yaad aaya..........

"mar mar kar jeena choor diya
lo humne peena choor diya "


yunhi likhte rahiyega...............

shukriya Aman ji...

khushi hui aapko yahan dekhkar...
umeed hai aapne bhi peena chod diya hoga
shukriya...mere kalaam par gaurfarmane ke liye

apna khayal rakhiyega

masoomshayer 3rd May 2006 11:06 AM

bemisal
 
kamal kee baat kahee hai tum ne
kayee sher tumahre aise hain ke bas dekhte rah jayo kho jayo us main wah

aur kamal kee baat to ye ise parho tum bhee bas aise jaise tum ne na likha ho wah kah jayogee

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai

Anil

Rubeena Parveen 3rd May 2006 11:23 AM

adab wafa ji

kaisi hain

kafi din baad apki koi rachna padhane ko mili apke alfaz main itna dard kahan se ata he samjh nahi ata dard ko kagaz per utare main aap mahir hain apki ghazal ka her sher byan karta he ki apke andar kitna dard he apki is rachna ki tareef karne ke liye main alfaz ki mauhtaj ho gayee hoon bas itna hi kahungi

"Ab to ye alam he ki gham ki bhi khabar hoti nahi
ashak beh jate hain lakin aaNkh tar hoti nahi"

keep writing

take care
bye

acharya_mj 3rd May 2006 01:17 PM

hi
 
hi wafaa ji bahut khoob likha hai
bas aise hi likhte rahiye
take care
regards
manu

ek_wafa 3rd May 2006 06:48 PM

Re: bemisal
 
Quote:

Originally posted by masoomshayer
kamal kee baat kahee hai tum ne
kayee sher tumahre aise hain ke bas dekhte rah jayo kho jayo us main wah

aur kamal kee baat to ye ise parho tum bhee bas aise jaise tum ne na likha ho wah kah jayogee

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai

Anil


Anil ji….

Aapke reply ka hamesha intezaar rehta hai…..aap aaye ..bahut acha laga….aur aapko itni pasand aayi…..shukriya…..bahut bahut shukriya.

Apna khayal rakhyiega

ek_wafa 3rd May 2006 06:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Rubeena Parveen
adab wafa ji

kaisi hain

kafi din baad apki koi rachna padhane ko mili apke alfaz main itna dard kahan se ata he samjh nahi ata dard ko kagaz per utare main aap mahir hain apki ghazal ka her sher byan karta he ki apke andar kitna dard he apki is rachna ki tareef karne ke liye main alfaz ki mauhtaj ho gayee hoon bas itna hi kahungi

"Ab to ye alam he ki gham ki bhi khabar hoti nahi
ashak beh jate hain lakin aaNkh tar hoti nahi"

keep writing

take care
bye


Rubeena ji….namaskar…

…main theek hoon….aap kaisi hain..kafi dinon baad aapka aana hua…aapka intezar kar rahe thhey mere kalaam……aaj aap aayi …..acha laga….bahut bahut shukriya

…..ye jaroori nahin ki jo kaagaz par dard likha jata hai,wo uss shaks ke sath beet raha ho…..kisi aur ke dard ko samajhkar…mehsus karo toh bhi kalam chalne lagti hai…..aapne mere kalaam par gaur farmaya…bahut shukriya

"Ab to ye alam he ki gham ki bhi khabar hoti nahi
ashak beh jate hain lakin aaNkh tar hoti nahi"……wah!......khoob kaha aapne…

Apna khayal rakhyiega

ek_wafa 3rd May 2006 06:50 PM

Re: hi
 
Quote:

Originally posted by acharya_mj
hi wafaa ji bahut khoob likha hai
bas aise hi likhte rahiye
take care
regards
manu


Manu ji...

bahut bahut shukriya mere kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye.....shukriya

apna khayal rakhyiega

manoj kureel 16th May 2006 07:11 PM

Re: Hua Kya Hai
 
Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai

Diya jalakar meri Rooh ko behlate ho tum
Abb nahin hoon Main ismein Shuba kya hai

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai


WAH..!!!
KYA BAAT HAI..>!!
WAFA JI...MUJHE hairat hai itna sundar gazal se ab tak mein mehroom kyun raha???bahoot gehre jazbaaton ko jubaan bakshi hai aapne..magar na jane kyun kafan-mazaar ki baatein aapse padhna acha nahin laga.
meri daad kuboool kijiye..likhte rahiye...aapki gazlon ki shamma yunhi roshan hoti rahe.,.yeh umeed hai.
take care
-MANOJ

ek_wafa 17th May 2006 05:21 PM

Re: Re: Hua Kya Hai
 
Quote:

Originally posted by manoj kureel
Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai

Diya jalakar meri Rooh ko behlate ho tum
Abb nahin hoon Main ismein Shuba kya hai

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai


WAH..!!!
KYA BAAT HAI..>!!
WAFA JI...MUJHE hairat hai itna sundar gazal se ab tak mein mehroom kyun raha???bahoot gehre jazbaaton ko jubaan bakshi hai aapne..magar na jane kyun kafan-mazaar ki baatein aapse padhna acha nahin laga.
meri daad kuboool kijiye..likhte rahiye...aapki gazlon ki shamma yunhi roshan hoti rahe.,.yeh umeed hai.
take care
-MANOJ


Manoj ji….

aapke aane se ye ghazal aaj safal hui hai….poori hui….aapke reply ka intezaar rehta hai meri ghazalon ko……aapse wah paana…bahut badi baat hai….mujhe khushi hui aap yahan aaye..meri ghazal ko pasand kiya..bahut bahut shukriya

aur jahan takk kafan ya mazaar ki baat hai toh Manoj ji…ye bhi toh ek sachai hai jeevan ki jiska saamna har kisi ko ek na ek din karna hi hai….

aapki di hui daad sar ankhon par…..aur jab takk dard rahega wafa likhti rahegi……

apna khayal rakhyiega

Mayank 18th May 2006 12:21 PM

Re: Hua Kya Hai
 
Quote:

Originally posted by ek_wafa

Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai


Ghaalib jee ki likhii hu_ii is zameen par na jaane kitne GHazal ban CHuke haiN aur na jaane kitne aur baneNge.. Aap ne bhi bohat achchhi kosish ki hai... Ye 2 SHer bohat achchhe lage.. Daad haazir hai wafaa jee.. qubuul farmaaiye...:)

Mayank

ek_wafa 31st May 2006 04:35 PM

Re: Re: Hua Kya Hai
 
Quote:

Originally posted by Anjana Rahi
Ghaalib jee ki likhii hu_ii is zameen par na jaane kitne GHazal ban CHuke haiN aur na jaane kitne aur baneNge.. Aap ne bhi bohat achchhi kosish ki hai... Ye 2 SHer bohat achchhe lage.. Daad haazir hai wafaa jee.. qubuul farmaaiye...:)

Mayank

bahut bahut shukriya aapka..aapne mere kalaam ko apna waqt diya....bahut shukriya

daad kabool hai...ek baar phir shukriya

apna khayal rakhyiega

pallavi_here 1st June 2006 10:16 PM

Re: Hua Kya Hai
 
Quote:

Originally posted by ek_wafa
Maut bhi humiko mili bata ye Saza kya hai
Chhupa hai jo Raaz ismein wo Chhupa kya hai

Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai

Diya jalakar meri Rooh ko behlate ho tum
Abb nahin hoon Main ismein Shuba kya hai

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai

Qatil si hai ye gazal :)
hardard ko muskuraake bayaan kiya ho jaise .. behatareennn
likhti rahiye yu hi :)


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