words cant explain.....can u?
Words can't explain
Was it a dream or a real day? When I was speechless & nothing to say Standing still, just looking at you Words can't explain that day. I thought one day you will be mine Does I have a right to see a dream so fine? Standing still, just looking at you Words can't explain my dream. I proposed & said "I love you" She said, " I am so proud to have a friend like you" Standing still, just looking at you Words can't explain my love. I said, "May you be happy forever" Your mother's choice was it With whom you will live forever Words cant't explain my feelings. God made you, so proud will he be, I left the country, went away. Did you ever think how I will be? Words can't explain my sadness. In my life I never married Lived my life With the dream of her that I carried Words can't explain this poem. |
hey buddy...
this is really awsome.....huhh...i find this to be similar to vat had happened to me......this is really really nice....i dont no how i missed readin this all these days...... thanks for sharin this with us...keep postin them.. bye take care |
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thnx karthik......
its sad if it happened to anyone like u... do u think it happened with me too...?. |
thnx shalini....
i hope uliked it and felt as if its a real poem in someone's life...and worth reading even one time..... blow of a word strikes much deeper thn a blow of a sword |
hello yashad
its so sad ..isnt it????did it happen with u also....i guess it happned...cz otherwise u wudnt hav ritten it so welll...may b.... not sure.... |
hey karthik do um ind if iask u wut happened with u....?
can utell me ....coz i wanna know how does it relate to the poem iwrote .....u can mail me at yashad67@rediffmail.com |
nice poetry yash ji...it shows sorrow and hurt
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thnx mukhraji.......
hope u like it..... |
thnx .......
if uliked it .....plz tell others to read it and reply me.....so that maybe ican write better than this in future.....plz ....thnx very much.....for replying me .....if uwant to mail me anytime ......plz mail it ....at yashad67@rediffmail.com thnx very much for ur kind co-operation |
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