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yashad 5th April 2005 06:29 AM

words cant explain.....can u?
 
Words can't explain



Was it a dream or a real day?
When I was speechless & nothing to say
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain that day.

I thought one day you will be mine
Does I have a right to see a dream so fine?
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my dream.

I proposed & said "I love you"
She said, " I am so proud to have a friend like you"
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my love.

I said, "May you be happy forever"
Your mother's choice was it
With whom you will live forever
Words cant't explain my feelings.

God made you, so proud will he be,
I left the country, went away.
Did you ever think how I will be?
Words can't explain my sadness.

In my life I never married
Lived my life
With the dream of her that I carried
Words can't explain this poem.

karthik 19th April 2005 06:26 PM

hey buddy...
this is really awsome.....huhh...i find this to be similar to vat had happened to me......this is really really nice....i dont no how i missed readin this all these days......
thanks for sharin this with us...keep postin them..
bye take care

shalini 19th April 2005 06:35 PM

Re: words cant explain.....can u?
 
Quote:

Originally posted by yashad
Words can't explain



Was it a dream or a real day?
When I was speechless & nothing to say
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain that day.

I thought one day you will be mine
Does I have a right to see a dream so fine?
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my dream.

I proposed & said "I love you"
She said, " I am so proud to have a friend like you"
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my love.

I said, "May you be happy forever"
Your mother's choice was it
With whom you will live forever
Words cant't explain my feelings.

God made you, so proud will he be,
I left the country, went away.
Did you ever think how I will be?
Words can't explain my sadness.

In my life I never married
Lived my life
With the dream of her that I carried
Words can't explain this poem.

Nice words......yashji

yashad 20th April 2005 04:47 AM

thnx karthik......
its sad if it happened to anyone like u...
do u think it happened with me too...?.

yashad 20th April 2005 04:49 AM

thnx shalini....
i hope uliked it and felt as if its a real poem in someone's life...and worth reading even one time.....

blow of a word strikes much deeper thn a blow of a sword

karthik 20th April 2005 07:21 AM

hello yashad
its so sad ..isnt it????did it happen with u also....i guess it happned...cz otherwise u wudnt hav ritten it so welll...may b.... not sure....

yashad 21st April 2005 06:21 AM

hey karthik do um ind if iask u wut happened with u....?
can utell me ....coz i wanna know how does it relate to the poem iwrote .....u can mail me at yashad67@rediffmail.com

Mukhra 21st April 2005 06:25 AM

nice poetry yash ji...it shows sorrow and hurt

yashad 21st April 2005 06:27 AM

thnx mukhraji.......
hope u like it.....

yashad 24th April 2005 06:10 AM

thnx .......
if uliked it .....plz tell others to read it and reply me.....so that maybe ican write better than this in future.....plz ....thnx very much.....for replying me .....if uwant to mail me anytime ......plz mail it ....at yashad67@rediffmail.com
thnx very much for ur kind co-operation


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