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kwahish 27th November 2009 04:44 PM

Yeh zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha
 
Ahel E Bazm ko mera salam,

Shayari E sharab ke padhne waloN ke liye aaj main ek khaas peshkash nazar pesh ker raha hun, abtak maine is forume ke iye kabhi dilse likhane ki koshish nahi ki thi per meri yeh koshish sabhi saaqi E yaar ke liye tahe dil se ki gayi hai, gar aapko pasand aaye to apne rai se nawaziyenga.............. :)

To mere Gazall ka lutf uthaiye,:)

Mulayzaa farmaiye.......:)



Saaqi E yaar ka hi ab koyiN thikana naa raha
Aaj mere hi hisse kyuN koi paimana naa raha


Sabhi ne badhaya tha, hath pamane ki taraf
YeH zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha


Ghar, ghar mein ho rahi hai maikshiN kuch aisi
Maikhane hi maikhane hua maikhana na raha


Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha


Ley na jaye Kwahish barbaadi ki raahon per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koyi bahana naa raha

vikramjethi 27th November 2009 06:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kwahish (Post 375426)
Ahel E Bazm ko mera salam,

Shayari E sharab ke padhne waloN ke liye aaj main ek khaas peshkash nazar pesh ker raha hun, abtak maine is forume ke iye kabhi dilse likhane ki koshish nahi ki thi per meri yeh koshish sabhi saaqi E yaar ke liye tahe dil se ki gayi hai, gar aapko pasand aaye to apne rai se nawaziyenga.............. :)

To mere Gazall ka lutf uthaiye,:)

Mulayzaa farmaiye.......:)



Saaqi E yaar ka hi ab koyiN thikana naa raha
Aaj mere hi hisse kyuN koi paimana naa raha


Sabhi ne badhaya tha, hath pamane ki taraf
YeH zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha


Ghar, ghar mein ho rahi hai maikshiN kuch aisi
Maikhane hi maikhane hua maikhana na raha


Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha


Ley na jaye Kwahish barbaadi ki raahon per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koyi
bahana naa raha


Khwahish jii,

Bahut badhiya lagi hame aapki ye Ghazal....
Neeche wala sheyr to khaas taur pe pasand aaya...

Ghar, ghar meiN ho rahi hai maikashi Kuch aisi
Maikhane hi Maikhane hue maikhana na raha

Tahe dil se daad haazir hai Janaab Kabuul farmaayeN...!!!
Aise hi likhte rahiye......
Khuda aapki kalam ko aur bhi nehmatoN se nawaazish kare, bas yahi dua hai meri...

Ijaazat...
Vikram

kwahish 28th November 2009 07:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vikramjethi (Post 375435)
Khwahish jii,

Bahut badhiya lagi hame aapki ye Ghazal....
Neeche wala sheyr to khaas taur pe pasand aaya...

Ghar, ghar meiN ho rahi hai maikashi Kuch aisi
Maikhane hi Maikhane hue maikhana na raha

Tahe dil se daad haazir hai Janaab Kabuul farmaayeN...!!!
Aise hi likhte rahiye......
Khuda aapki kalam ko aur bhi nehmatoN se nawaazish kare, bas yahi dua hai meri...

Ijaazat...
Vikram

Thanks Vikram jee.............

Aapki daad dil se kabool hai janab, jab yeh koshish bhi dil se ki hai to koyiN na koyiN sher mein to main padhne wale ke kareeb ja hi sakunga.........:)

Aape hounsla afzai ka tahe dil se shukriyaa...:)
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush Rahiye
Khuda Hafez......:)


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