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v/veena 10th September 2011 06:05 AM

soch
 
socha rhe gazal hum bhi banayenge
unki yaad se use nahlayenge


likhne ki bari aayi to dil samaj na paye
intezar ki dastaan to ab kya sunaye

pal pal badta pyaar ,badta hi jaye
ek ehsaas sukhd nikhar samne aaye

intezar me bhi pyaar samaye
pyaar hi pyaar ki baat man ko bhaye

naresh_mehra110 10th September 2011 09:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by v/veena (Post 430330)
socha rhe gazal hum bhi banayenge
unki yaad se use nahlayenge


likhne ki bari aayi to dil samaj na paye
intezar ki dastaan to ab kya sunaye

pal pal badta pyaar ,badta hi jaye
ek ehsaas sukhd nikhar samne aaye

intezar me bhi pyaar samaye
pyaar hi pyaar ki baat man ko bhaye

Good One .... Veena Ji ! :)

Nice Effort .......... !

v/veena 10th September 2011 12:43 PM

kuch koshise kuch tarife
alfaz sukriya ke hamare

ala ala gazlo ke bitch
adna si lino pe jo nazar dale

bahut bahut dhanywad nareshji aapka

sameer'shaad' 11th September 2011 10:30 AM

waah aapka andaaze reply bhi bbahot khoob hai veena jee... keep writing.. khush rahiye

Shaad...

v/veena 11th September 2011 11:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 430388)
waah aapka andaaze reply bhi bbahot khoob hai veena jee... keep writing.. khush rahiye

Shaad...

Sukriya

aap jaise aasman ko chute sitare
hum bhi dharti ke prani pyare
sikh hi lete hai dekhkar in unchi hastiyo ko
jinse wo bekhabar aur hamare vare nyare

sameer'shaad' 12th September 2011 09:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by v/veena (Post 430392)
Sukriya

aap jaise aasman ko chute sitare
hum bhi dharti ke prani pyare
sikh hi lete hai dekhkar in unchi hastiyo ko
jinse wo bekhabar aur hamare vare nyare


Veenaa jee maine sahi kahaa tha ke aapka reply karne ka andaaz bahot khoob hai.. har insaan me kuch na kuch khaas zaroor hotaa hai aur hame aapki yeh adaa bahot pasand aai.. Aap yaqeenan bahot khoob likhti hain, bas yuNhi likhti rahiye aur is kalaa ko aur bhi nikhaaarti rahiye... shukriyaa

Shaad...

sunita thakur 12th September 2011 10:33 PM

accha likha hai aapne veena jiii...........................:)

v/veena 13th September 2011 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 430418)
Veenaa jee maine sahi kahaa tha ke aapka reply karne ka andaaz bahot khoob hai.. har insaan me kuch na kuch khaas zaroor hotaa hai aur hame aapki yeh adaa bahot pasand aai.. Aap yaqeenan bahot khoob likhti hain, bas yuNhi likhti rahiye aur is kalaa ko aur bhi nikhaaarti rahiye... shukriyaa

Shaad...


sun tarane ,khil ute man ke aashiyane
sukriya to bahut chota,aapke samne

sukriya

v/veena 13th September 2011 05:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 430421)
accha likha hai aapne veena jiii...........................:)


sham ko subhah hum likte
per aap ki tarif se , din hamare badlate


sukriya

sunita thakur 14th September 2011 02:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by v/veena (Post 430443)
sham ko subhah hum likte
per aap ki tarif se , din hamare badlate


sukriya

aree wah.......kya andaaz hai baat karne.....hame pasand aaya aapka yeh andaaz :)

v/veena 16th September 2011 04:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sunita virender (Post 430461)
aree wah.......kya andaaz hai baat karne.....hame pasand aaya aapka yeh andaaz :)



sukriya ji sukriya

khuskismati hamari
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andaz shayrana
mijaj ka fir kya thikana
dil me pyaar to
geet bante apne aap
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Rajraju 18th September 2011 01:18 AM

Ab itne bade logon ke reply main kya reply du..mujhe to is tarah mehsus ho raha hai ki-
Teri mehfil me aarzoo meri,is tarah dilme simti jati hai..
Jaise dehaat ki koi ladki sahar me pehli baar aati hai..

v/veena 19th September 2011 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rajraju (Post 430574)
Ab itne bade logon ke reply main kya reply du..mujhe to is tarah mehsus ho raha hai ki-
Teri mehfil me aarzoo meri,is tarah dilme simti jati hai..
Jaise dehaat ki koi ladki sahar me pehli baar aati hai..

sukriya

aap hum choto ki reply isi tarah de diya kare
dehataan badi furtili sikhe sahar ke nakhre anek





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shabd jod tod like jaise sayane
jaiese dehat se koi ladki
sahar me pahli baar aye


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