...:Sad punjabi poetry:...
 

Hi everyone!

Aap sab kaise ho? Well I'm a new member... and this is one of my first posts. Abhi tak to maine itne shers nahi parhe, lekin jitne parhe hain un pe reply kiya hai. Well anyway thats not the reason why I'm posting now.

Jaise ke aap dekh rahe hain to is post ka subject " Sad punjabi poetry" hai, and abhi tak maine 1 or 2 punjabi sher parhe hain by Priya i think it was... So I was wondering if someone could post any punjabi poem here, it would be nice if it was a sad poem :)

Hmm... I was going to paste "Waris Shah nu" lekin i didnt find it on net. So if someone had that too, please do write it down:) "Waris Shah nu" is also a song from Pinjar. I'm not sure if anyone liked that song, but I did....:)

okz...c ya,

udaas_muskaan

Udas Muskaan ji......


i will try to find out the same for you.....


chalda haan.....

hi muskaan

how r u


are u looking for this......

"jitt teri ho gayi sanu khunje laun waliye,
horan naal udd gayi sanu choge paun waliye,
taan maniye karie softan je hun vi sire chada jaen,
waris shah nu jhootha kariye je navian naal nibha jaen.."


Devdaas...

aj aakhan waaris shah nooN kito.n qabra.n vicho.n bol!
te aj kitab-e-ishq da koi agla varka phol!

ik roi si dhii punjab dii tuu likh-likh mare vaiN
aj lakkha.n dheeyan rondian tainuu.n waaris shah nooN kahaN!

uTh darmandaN diaa dardiiaa uTh tak apNa punjaab!
aj bele laashaa.n vichiiaa.n te lahu dii bharii chenaab!

kise ne panja paaNia.n vich dittii zahir rala!
te unhaa.n paaNiaa.n dharat nuu.n dittaa paaNii laa!

jitthe vajdii phuuk pyaar di ve oh vanjhli gayi guaach
ranjhe de sab veer aj bhul gaye usdi jaach

dharti te lahu vasiya, qabran payiyan choN
preet diyan shaahazaadiiaa.n aj vich mazaaraa.n roN

aj sab 'qaido' baN gaye, husn ishq de chor
aj kitho.n liaaiie labbh ke waaris shah ik hor

aj aakhan waaris shah nooN kito.n qabra.n vicho.n bol!
te aj kitab-e-ishq da koi agla varka phol!

mere varinder, mushkaan,

is rachna k sath joodi hui kuch baate shere karna chahungi...........
meri bhi yah pasand ki rachna hai. ek to vajah yah bhi hai ke yah amrita pritam ki likhi hui hai.

amrita ji ki khud ki jubaani ~

dukho ki kahaniya kah kah kar log thhak gaye thhae, par yah kahaniya umr se pahlay khatam hone waali nahi thhi......
delhi se wapasi k safar maie chalti hui ghadi maie nind aankho k paas nahi fatak rahi thhi...
ghadi k baahar ghor andhera samay k itihaas k samaan thha. hava is tarah saai saai kar rahi thhi jaise itihaas k pahlu maie baith kar ro rahi ho. baahar oonchae oonche pead dukho ki tarah lage huae thhae. kao jagah pead nahi hote thhae kewal virani hoti thhi, aur is virani k tilae aise pratiit hote thhae jaise yah tilae nahi kabre ho.

varis shah ki panktiya mere jahen maie ghum rahi thhi------- 'bhala moae te bichdae kaun melae.....' aur muje laga ki waaris shah kitna bada kavi thha, woh hir ke dukh ko ga saka. aaj panjaab ki ek beti nahi lakho betiya ro rahi hai. aaj inke dukh ko kaun gaayega? aur muje waaris shah k sivaay aur koi aisa nahi laga jise sambodhan kar k maie yah baat kahti. oos raat chalti hui ghadi maie hilte aur kampte kalam se ek kavita likhi-----

aj aakhan waaris shah nooN kito.n qabra.n vicho.n bol!
te aj kitab-e-ishq da koi agla varka phol!



fir to is kavita k kai charche huae kai daastaan bani...... fir kabhi sahi....

meena

hi
 

here is something in punjabi do let me know what u say about it

Ni tu baksh gunah mere
ki me teriya bhulla bhul java
mainu sambhi rakhi naina which
kittey hanju ban na dhul java
phul pyaar da jo murjha gaya
kitey inj na howe suk jaave
ki pata is zindagi da hun
kis mor te aake ruk jaave
ni tu baksh.......


Priya

Muskaan ji....

thuvanu apna geet mil hi gaya.....

Varinder veer.....


bada sona geet hai eh.......

Thanks.....


Meena Di.....


Aapne is geet mein reply karke chaar chaand laga diye hain....


Priya ji


Thuvada da jawab koi nahi.....


kidre hor ik changi ji nazm pesh karoonga thuvade vaaste.....



Tumhara.....

Hi to everyone!

Ghayalparwana ji, thx! I was searching for this rachna, lekin mujhe nahi mila tha internet pe. Thx again for finding this for me:)

Aman ji, thx for taking time and to reply:) It was very kind of you and everyone else who replied.

LuvPriya, the poem was great! Youre great to write punjabi poems. Aapka poem parthe hoe one can feel the words and the illusions one gets while reading it. And sorry for that I didnt remember your name in my first post, it was your poems I had read before I started my own thread abt "Sad punjabi shers". I hope that aapko bura nahi laga...Honestly, I didnt knew that It was so many members by the name "priya". I know I should have been more specific, and I will remember that till next time:)

Devdaas thx for replying, lekin it wasnt what I was looking for. But thx again for trying. Dont get sad, you could post other punjabi poems on this thread:)

Meena ji, your just wonderful! I dont have the words to explain...But it was surely great to read ur reply.


Bye for now, and see you again everyone.

UdaasMuskaan

muskaan ji pehlaa te welcome tuhaada is site te...mein aaj hi eh post padhi je....te mere saare dostaan se jis tarah tuhaada dil khol ke saath ditaa bahut changaa lagyaa..

ghayal bhai..priya ji...meena di...aman veer bahut sona likha je saaraya ne...

mein kuch nava te nahi likhda kuch din pehle eh post kitta si ahi tuhadi nazar dobaara

originally it was posted here:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=27209

Bhuaa khola baithi kole
ankha vichon athruu bole
kainde naina hole hole, ho kainde naina hole hole
ki kariye hun 'yaar'...
ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

mathe tere suha teeka
kive teri mein raah udeeka
ohi galaan ohiyan cheesa, ho ohi galaan ohiyan cheesa
chehte aaundi ae 'sarkaar'
ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

babul di tu dhiye raani
saadi soni nahi kahuni
tere haathe mehndi da vi, ho tere hathe mehndi da vi
hone he rang 'laal'
ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

doli teri uthauna sokha
lag ke gale ruwaunaa sokha
kyon tu deta mainu dokha, kyon tu deta mainu dokha
asi vi ta seege tere 'yaar'
ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

kamliye tu yaad hai aauni
tere baajon neend na aauni
gar gar chalni ahi kahaani, ghar ghar chalni ahi kahaani
tu deeta saanu 'maar'
ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

jaa tur jaa tu hogayi parayi
'bhraa' sade teri 'maang' sajayi
jag vich baliye sab harjaai, ho jag vich baliye sab harjaai
kis bhraa nu kahiye 'yaar'
ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

ho das kive kar laiye....
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar', kive kar laiye
kive kar laiye hun 'pyaar' ...

Umeed hai tusa nu pasand aaugaa

-tuhaada apnaa

Hi!

Mast ji, thx for letting me be one of the gang here:) Ur poem was very sad and it just touched my heart. Parte parte to ankheen ansoon se bhar ai...It was written very well. Ho sake to aise aur poems post kijiyega.

Chalti hoon ab, will post some of my fav. poems here next time:)

UdaasMuskaan

mere chaand,

muje is panjabi kavita ka hindi arth sirf aadha hi pata hai...... jo maie, amrita ji ki atmakatha maie se tumhe bata rahi hu.........



aj aakhan waaris shah nooN kito.n qabra.n vicho.n bol!
te aj kitab-e-ishq da koi agla varka phol!


~ aaj waaris shah se kahti hu apni kabr maie se bolo
aur isqh ki kitaab ka koi naya prushth kholo

ik roi si dhii punjab dii tuu likh-likh mare vaiN
aj lakkha.n dheeyan rondian tainuu.n waaris shah nooN kahaN!

~ panjaab ki ek beti roi thhi, tune lambi daastaan likhi
aaj lakho betiya ro rahi hai, waaris shah tumse kah rahi hai

uTh darmandaN diaa dardiiaa uTh tak apNa punjaab!
aj bele laashaa.n vichiiaa.n te lahu dii bharii chenaab!


~ aey dardmando ke dost! apne panjaab ko dekho
van lasho se ante pade hai, chinaab lahu se bhar gaya hai.......