Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab
6th May 2005, 03:20 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,959
nasha
hello everybody,
hotee gairat to tere saath hee mar jaate sajan
laash kaandhon pe yoon apanee naa uthhaayee hotee
haath kyaa aayaa mere yek siyaahee ke siwaa
dekhane haal meraa too bhee tab...
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Forum: Shayri Ki Paathshaala
19th November 2002, 11:34 AM
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Replies: 101
Views: 138,934
very nice
wah maikashji,
aap ka ghazal ke bare mein jo likha woh bahut pasand aaya, wakai aap ka ghazal ke bare mein bahut gnan hai aur ise mein appreciate karta hoon.
Keep going
bye.
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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq
5th July 2002, 10:29 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 587
nice
HI firni,
Yeh to bahut achcha sher sunaya tumne.bilkul dad ke kabil hai.Iska jawab to nahin hai par ek gane ki line tumhe bhejta hoon. achchi or sachhi lage to batana. ye rahi
Bewafa...
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
27th June 2002, 02:30 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,241
usase bichhade ek zamana ho gaya
Hello Doston,
Ek Ghazal likh raha hoon, pasand aaye to dad dijiyega. to yeh rahi meri Ghazal.
Usase Bichhade ek Zamana ho gaya
yeh kissa bhi ab purana ho gaya,
Janmon ka...
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