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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st January 2018, 07:47 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,383
Posted By Pradhyuman
Ghazal: khushi dekhi nahin ke aa gaye...

aadaab dosto,

phir bahot dinoen baad yahaan aana hua hai. phir ek ghazal likhne ki gustakhi ki hai. par aap sab to dost hai to daad hi denge aur kya kar bhi sakte ho? :D

khabar bheji nahin ye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th September 2015, 11:09 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,994
Posted By Pradhyuman
waah saxena ji, bahot hi kaamyaam ghazal hui hai....

waah saxena ji, bahot hi kaamyaam ghazal hui hai. yeh sher khaas taur se pasand aaya. daad hi daad.


Zindagi hai tuli aazmane ko har pal
Mujhe ab harik imtehaaN dhoondta hai
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th September 2015, 07:13 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,669
Posted By Pradhyuman
waah Maikash sahaab..kya kehne...hum to aapke...

waah Maikash sahaab..kya kehne...hum to aapke fann ke ek arse se muriid rahe hain. dil se nikli houi daad kubool kijiyega. yeh do sher khaas pasand aaye.

ab ishq ke zaKhmoN kaa, Gham kaise kareiN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th September 2015, 03:24 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,132
Posted By Pradhyuman
Ghazal: yunhi zindagi pal pal mein saari guzar gayi...

aadaab dosto,

aaj ek arse baad kuch likh paaya hun. umeed hai aapke dil tak pahunchenge yeh alfaaz. aapki raaii ka be-sabrii se intezaar rahega. :)

halke mein liya jo phir to bhaari guzar gayi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th August 2014, 04:43 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 2,604
Posted By Pradhyuman
bahot khoob. yeh sher haasil-e-ghazal rahaa..dil...

bahot khoob. yeh sher haasil-e-ghazal rahaa..dil se daad


Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 6th August 2014, 02:17 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 5,558
Posted By Pradhyuman
mat-bhed, man mutaav, na-pasandgi, naaraazgi,...

mat-bhed, man mutaav, na-pasandgi, naaraazgi, ladaai-jhagda sab jaayaz hai! adab ka overdose bhi acha nahi hai. creative log eccentric nahi honge to kaun hoga? lekin inflated egos ko kab tak saath...
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 6th August 2014, 01:14 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 5,558
Posted By Pradhyuman
Hi All, It took me some time (almost a day)...

Hi All,

It took me some time (almost a day) to locate the original thread. I read all competing creations, judgement & the resulting comments.

This is what I have to say. Atleast there is life...
Forum: Ghazal Section 6th August 2014, 09:46 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,044
Posted By Pradhyuman
Aadaab mujeeb bhai, Aapne itni izzat di iske...

Aadaab mujeeb bhai,

Aapne itni izzat di iske liye bahot shukriya. Is baar main sirf audience me se dekhta hun. Agle competition se ye zimma lena chahunga gar kisi ko aitraaz na ho to.
Aapka dost,...
Forum: Ghazal Section 5th August 2014, 09:22 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,044
Posted By Pradhyuman
Aadaab Mujeeb bhai, Mujhe bhi judge banna...

Aadaab Mujeeb bhai,

Mujhe bhi judge banna hai. Temporary shayar se to permanent judge ka title better hai. :) zidd bhai ke saath mujhe bhi bitha do. :)

Tasveeron pe ab kya likhen. Communication...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th June 2014, 05:43 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,357
Posted By Pradhyuman
kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai...

gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?

Pradhyuman - Bismil
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st May 2014, 12:27 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,138
Posted By Pradhyuman
waah.. bahot umda...kya kahne.. har qadam us...

waah.. bahot umda...kya kahne..

har qadam us ke naqsh-e-paa* paaooN

kaisee mushkil dagar meiN aayaa hooN


koyee ab baat tak naheeN kartaa

bas teree baat bhar meiN aayaa hooN
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th December 2013, 04:28 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,378
Posted By Pradhyuman
Zarraa ji aadaab, mujhe poori hi ghazal...

Zarraa ji aadaab,

mujhe poori hi ghazal pasand aayi..magar yeh sher mashallah..kya kehne..daad hi daad..jeete rahiye..aabaad rahiye

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman - Bismil
Forum: English Poetry 4th July 2013, 04:58 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,712
Posted By Pradhyuman
wow..heartfelt..thanks for sharing Ahmed bhai..

wow..heartfelt..thanks for sharing Ahmed bhai..
Forum: English Poetry 26th June 2013, 12:28 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,375
Posted By Pradhyuman
Words come to me like death to an old man...

Hi,

This isn't a poem but more of a random chain of thoughts. Felt like sharing with you all.

Words come to me like death to an old man.
Unwelcome but not unexpected.
They sit in one corner...
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 3rd June 2013, 01:06 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 4,007
Posted By Pradhyuman
sameer mere bhai, ek thread create to karo...

sameer mere bhai,

ek thread create to karo aur saare members ko message karo..ho sakta hai zyaadatar log wahaan post kare..

main koshish karta hun jitna ho sake yahaan aane ki..lekin sach kahun...
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 27th May 2013, 12:38 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 4,007
Posted By Pradhyuman
ji shukriya aap teenoeN ka ki aapko meri baat...

ji shukriya aap teenoeN ka ki aapko meri baat pasand aayi aur uspar kuch socha bhi jaayega..iska background yeh hai ki aajkal shayri mein bahot se naye sadasya aa gaye hai..bahot se puraane saathi...
Forum: Feedback and Suggestions 26th May 2013, 01:16 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 4,007
Posted By Pradhyuman
Moderators please note

Meri ye request hai ek sticky thread create kijiye jahaan sdc ke members apni likhi koi bhi ek sabse behtareen creation post Karen. This is my way of knowing them. It is as good as interview section...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th May 2013, 02:35 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,885
Posted By Pradhyuman
masood bhai aadaab, bahot bahot...

masood bhai aadaab,

bahot bahot shukriya..abhi nazar padhi aapki comment par..bhai aap jo bhi likhte ho poetry lagta hai..aap ko kuch napasand ho aur wo zaahir kiya to woh bhi padhna acha hi lagta...
Forum: English Poetry 20th May 2013, 02:30 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,061
Posted By Pradhyuman
Dear Taish and Sanjay bhai, it feels great...

Dear Taish and Sanjay bhai,

it feels great to know that someone's understood and appreciated your work.. more importantly understood.

so thanks a tonne..god bless

Ahmed bhai - retirement to...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 20th May 2013, 02:27 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 3,370
Posted By Pradhyuman
shukriyaa ahmed bhai, taish sahab aur zainy jee ...

shukriyaa ahmed bhai, taish sahab aur zainy jee

aapko hasi aayi aur tanz bhi nazar aaya..to yeh koshish kaamiyaab hui...unhi saath dete rahiyega.. god bless

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman - Bismil
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th May 2013, 02:23 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,237
Posted By Pradhyuman
shukriya aslam noor sahaab..aapki daad mujhe dil...

shukriya aslam noor sahaab..aapki daad mujhe dil se kubool hai...

god bless u

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman - Bismil
Forum: Aapki Shayri 20th May 2013, 02:21 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,358
Posted By Pradhyuman
chela guru rehne dijiye...mujhe utna kuch aata...

chela guru rehne dijiye...mujhe utna kuch aata nahi ki guru bann saku aur use justify bhi kar saku...gar aap sach mein iccha rakhte hai ghazal ki technicalities sikhne ki to zidd ya janumanu ko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st May 2013, 01:14 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,237
Posted By Pradhyuman
rajinder ji, dhaval bhai, uff ak sahab, zainy ji,...

rajinder ji, dhaval bhai, uff ak sahab, zainy ji, ahmed hyderabadi sahaab, ishk ek ibaadat sahaab, sameer bhai,

aap sab mere azeez hai..umeed hai sab khairiyat se honge...aapka dil se shukriyada...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st May 2013, 01:06 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,217
Posted By Pradhyuman
bahot shukriya aap sabhi dosto ka...aapki daad...

bahot shukriya aap sabhi dosto ka...aapki daad aur hounslafzai ka asar ta-umr rahega mujh par. :)

aur hatim sahaab..yeh bhi khushi hai ki kisi naye insaan tak pahunchi meri baat..shukriya bahot...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 03:03 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,364
Posted By Pradhyuman
sajid bhai aadaab..kaise haiN aap? umeed hai...

sajid bhai aadaab..kaise haiN aap? umeed hai khairiyat se honge.. :)

matla lajawaab hai..maqte meiN aapne apna takhallus kamaal fit kiya hai..daad.. aur jaisa kuch dosto ne poocha meiN bhi poochna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 02:58 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,262
Posted By Pradhyuman
lajawaab maqta naresh ji...daad..ek request hai...

lajawaab maqta naresh ji...daad..ek request hai aapse...chahta hun aap ek koshish kare behR meiN likhne ki..wo isliye ki mujhe aap ke khyaal hamesha se hi bahot pasand hai..aur unhe gar meter meiN...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 02:43 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,858
Posted By Pradhyuman
shaad bhai, jitni pasand mujhe aapki ye...

shaad bhai,

jitni pasand mujhe aapki ye ghazal aayi utna hi pasand zidd ka uspe tabsera..maano jaise heere ko taraasha ho..meri request hai aapse ke iss version ko hi aap apna version...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th March 2013, 05:10 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,806
Posted By Pradhyuman
waahh..bahot hi umda.. ye sach hai tirii...

waahh..bahot hi umda..

ye sach hai tirii yaad ne taskeen to kuchh dii
kambaKht ne zaKhmoN ko ubhaaraa bhii bahut hai
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th March 2013, 05:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,217
Posted By Pradhyuman
Ghazal: Kisi pe mar ke dekho...

aadaab dosto,

ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi..

Ise bhi kar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th March 2013, 05:26 PM
Replies: 85
Views: 6,700
Posted By Pradhyuman
i am online. sorry for being late..how do i get...

i am online. sorry for being late..how do i get to be part of this?
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2013, 02:57 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 2,838
Posted By Pradhyuman
bahot ache kshitiz bhai...daad hi daad. yeh sher...

bahot ache kshitiz bhai...daad hi daad. yeh sher dil ke bahot kareeb raha..

Kuch der hum bhi kahte rahe dil ki aarzoo
Phir haar ke karne lage baateiN janaab sii

waahh..yunhi likhte rahiye..god...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:40 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,935
Posted By Pradhyuman
Ahmed bhai aadaab, bahot dinoeN baad yahaan...

Ahmed bhai aadaab,

bahot dinoeN baad yahaan aaya hun aur bahot dinoeN baad aapko padha hai..mazaa aa gaya.. yun to tamaam ghazal hi khoob hai..yeh sher khaas pasand aayaa..daad hi daad..god bless...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:36 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,969
Posted By Pradhyuman
bahot khoob...daad..yeh sher kaafi pasand...

bahot khoob...daad..yeh sher kaafi pasand aaya..yunhi likhte rahiye..god bless...

Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:31 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,021
Posted By Pradhyuman
bahot bahot khoob...jitni taareef karun kam...

bahot bahot khoob...jitni taareef karun kam hai..daad hi daad... aage bhi aapko padhna chaahunga.. god bless..yeh sher to kamaal ka hai

ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 2nd December 2012, 03:22 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 3,370
Posted By Pradhyuman
khyaal mera akela hai...

aadaab dosto,

pehli baar yahaan kuch post kar raha hun..umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi meri yeh adna si koshish

khyaal mera akela hai
bhainso ka tabela hai
samjhe to samjhaun kaise
roz ka...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 2nd December 2012, 03:17 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,914
Posted By Pradhyuman
masood bhai..yeh ghazal humourous zaroor hai..par...

masood bhai..yeh ghazal humourous zaroor hai..par jo baat aap keh gaye ho woh aap hi keh sakte ho..bahot teekha andaaz hai... bahot ache..daad hi daad
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 570
Posted By Pradhyuman
dhaval bhai, sunita ji, naresh ji, uff ak sahaab,...

dhaval bhai, sunita ji, naresh ji, uff ak sahaab, rajinder ji aap sabhi ka dil se shukriyaada karta hun...thank you all..god bless
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:11 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 637
Posted By Pradhyuman
Thank you all for appreciating my work..keeps me...

Thank you all for appreciating my work..keeps me motivated :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:10 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,005
Posted By Pradhyuman
shukriyaa shaad bhai..kaise ho? umeed hai...

shukriyaa shaad bhai..kaise ho? umeed hai khairiyat se honge..der se reply karne ke liye maufi chaahta hun
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2012, 03:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 656
Posted By Pradhyuman
Ahmad bhai, Naresh ji aur shakil sahaab...aap sab...

Ahmad bhai, Naresh ji aur shakil sahaab...aap sab ka dil se shukriyaada karna chahta hun..aapne inn maumooli ashaaroeN ko saraahaa...bahot shukriya..aage bhi mera likha aapko pasand aaye yehi umeed...
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