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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th March 2006, 03:03 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 998
Posted By vvenomouss
excellent ghazal

excellent ghazal
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd January 2005, 09:00 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 809
Posted By vvenomouss
hi..... aap ke sawaal ka jawab to nahin de...

hi.....
aap ke sawaal ka jawab to nahin de sakta...
ha itna keh sakta hoon ki bahuuuuuuuuuuuut hi zabardast likhi hai aapne...... har line apni jaga achi hai.........
thanks 4 sharing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2004, 03:46 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 623
Posted By vvenomouss
thnxxx........................... 4 ur...

thnxxx........................... 4 ur appreciation........ :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th November 2004, 12:45 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 623
Posted By vvenomouss
Apni hi mauj-e-ashk mein dooob raha hai koi...

Aboor har khatar-e-zindagi kiye zeher pee raha hai koi
Apni hi mauj-e-ahk mein doob raha hai koi

Tum mere shaayad ho hi nahin sakte
Phir kyun har aazmaaish se guzar raha hai koi

Adoo-e-jaan...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th November 2004, 12:40 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,040
Posted By vvenomouss
Aap sab ko yeh pasand aayi ,,,, mujhe bahut...

Aap sab ko yeh pasand aayi ,,,, mujhe bahut khushi hai....... & bahut bahut shukriya appreciation ka...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 1st October 2004, 12:59 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 969
Posted By vvenomouss
Helloo how r u? I hope fine...... ...

Helloo
how r u?
I hope fine......
hmmm....... words to aapne kaafi simple & easy ones use kiye hai lekin meanings bahut hi zabardast hai........ Ideas bahut hi ache hai...
I really liked it........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st October 2004, 12:46 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 438
Posted By vvenomouss
Post Hiiii......... how r u? hope fine... well 1st...

Hiiii.........
how r u? hope fine...
well 1st of all thanks 4 reading da
post & den 4 ur intrest in da explaination.....
ha sure y not....... its my pleasure 2 explain it

its as ...........
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th September 2004, 04:14 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 520
Posted By vvenomouss
Taseer Shikwa-e-jufaa-e-ishq shikanja ko kya kare?

Taseer shikwa-e-jafaa-e-ishq shikanja ko kya kare?
Fana nahin sagar-e-lahoo boond-e-jigar ko, to kya kare?

[Taseer = Asar]

Aaseer dar bahaar-e-qismat hoon, dekhe khizaan ka lekin
Sirf wajood...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th September 2004, 04:05 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 793
Posted By vvenomouss
Re: Mein Kabhi Khud Ko Akela Nahi Honay Daita...

Hello....
wah, likha to bahut hi nice hai.... & ideas bhi ache hai...
keep it uP......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th September 2004, 01:07 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,040
Posted By vvenomouss
Hii candyboy & ManPaki how r u? I hope fine.......

Hii candyboy & ManPaki
how r u? I hope fine....
well 1st of all thanks alot for reading the post....
& app ko yeh pasand aayi,,, made me v happy...
aap ka bahut shukriya for the appreciation.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th September 2004, 01:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 438
Posted By vvenomouss
Post Pusht-e-har raanaayi ka safar kya hai?

Pusht-e-har raanaayi ka safar kya hai?
Tajub saraab bhi, khwaahish-e-hamsafar kya hai?

Qabool har jazaa-e-duniya-o-mashharistaan bhi magar
haq nahin waja-e-bechaini-e-do aalam kya hai?

Qaata...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th September 2004, 08:55 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,040
Posted By vvenomouss
Post Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehra mein ... Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad duaa me

Dhoonda tumhein har bahaar mein, sehraa mein
Milein aakhirkaar kisi ki bad-duaa mein

Dhoowa uth raha hai naa jaane kyun
Shayad jala aur bhi koi tumhare jafa mein

[Jafa = zulm/situm/cruelity]...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th July 2004, 03:52 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,982
Posted By vvenomouss
Smile & Hiii meenki ... thanks 4 ur apprecition... ...

& Hiii meenki
... thanks 4 ur apprecition... hmm... age par to I dont think ki yeh depend karti hai .... Anyways bahut bahut shukriya hosila afzaayi ka....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th July 2004, 03:28 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 543
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello sanjoo... mere alfaaz kisi ko pasand...

Hello
sanjoo... mere alfaaz kisi ko pasand aaye, offcourse makes me happyy...
yaa,,, apna banne ke liye to offcourse is se bahter ashaar pesh karoonga...
Thanks alot 4 ur appreciationnn
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 14th July 2004, 12:55 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 2,079
Posted By vvenomouss
Hii arooba.... niceee :) I liked it... nice...

Hii arooba....
niceee :) I liked it... nice words....

Aik tum hi na mil sake warna
Milne wale bichad bichad ke mile!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th July 2004, 12:46 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,982
Posted By vvenomouss
hIiiii.... thankss 4 the appreciation... u...

hIiiii....
thankss 4 the appreciation... u really encouraged me...
Bahut hi khishi hoowi ki u liked it...
Thanks 4 ur reply... koshish karoonga ki agli dafa is se behtar ghazal pesh karoon......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th July 2004, 12:34 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 543
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello, priya aapne post padha thanks & aap...

Hello,
priya
aapne post padha thanks & aap ko pasand aaya mujhe bahut khushi hoowi,,, thanks alot 4 appreciation.
:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th July 2004, 04:09 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 543
Posted By vvenomouss
Sad Aaj To Ghum Ka Sabab Kuch Aur Hi Hai

Jab Tum Ne Saath Chod Diya...

Aaj to ghum ka sabab kuch aur hi hai
Chaand nikla wohi se dukh kuch aur hi hai

Socha tha mil jaayegi dil se dil ko raah
Kya thi khabar us dil ki raah koi aur hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th June 2004, 02:37 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 590
Posted By vvenomouss
Every1 Plz Read & Help Me

Here is a ghazal written by Mirza ghalib... I like it vvv much but I cannot understand it much.... Wat I thought about the meanings of this ghazal was totally wrong so I want some1 else to explain...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2004, 01:02 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,175
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello.. ya... Wah Wah to kehna ho pad raha...

Hello..
ya... Wah Wah to kehna ho pad raha hai... bahut hi achi haiii....

bus... duniya aisi hi jaga hai... baghair dikh ke khushi mil hi nahin saktiiii...

andherein mujh ko kya darayenge...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 18th April 2004, 11:49 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 585
Posted By vvenomouss
Faqiraana Aaye Sada Kar Chale Hum

A lovely ghazal by 'Meer Taqi Meer'...

faqiraana aaye sadaa kar chale
miyaa.N Khush raho ham duaa kar chale

jo tujh bin na jiine ko kahate the ham
so is ahd ko ab wafaa kar chale

koii...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th April 2004, 11:42 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,731
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello. wow, wow,... bahut hi zabardast hai......

Hello.
wow, wow,... bahut hi zabardast hai... itna acha likha hai ki mere words ise describe kar hi nahin sakte.


Every line touched my heart.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2004, 03:39 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 622
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello... Nice written :) . I liked ittt... Nice...

Hello...
Nice written :) . I liked ittt... Nice way of expressing..
Keep It Up
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2004, 03:34 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,101
Posted By vvenomouss
hiii... woww... kya kehna, bahut hi zabardats...

hiii...
woww... kya kehna, bahut hi zabardats likha hai... Mujhe bahut pasand aaya...
Every line is niceeee...
Thanks 4 Sharing this
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th April 2004, 11:37 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 793
Posted By vvenomouss
Hiiii..... niceeee feelings;-) I liked it :) ...

Hiiii.....
niceeee feelings;-)
I liked it :)
Thanks 4 sharing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th April 2004, 11:32 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,140
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello... vv nice... I liked it v much... ...

Hello...
vv nice... I liked it v much...
Keep It Up!
Thanks 4 Sharing
Forum: Ghazal Section 15th April 2004, 11:07 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 988
Posted By vvenomouss
Hiiiii... I m fineee & how r u... hope the same 4...

Hiiiii... I m fineee & how r u... hope the same 4 uuuuuuuu
hmMmM... to aakhir sun hi liyaaa:) ... I love this sonngg!
Take care & bye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2004, 10:58 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,930
Posted By vvenomouss
Hi talib,,, Fantastic sher!... after many days...

Hi talib,,,
Fantastic sher!... after many days I came 2 shayri.com & got a verrry nice sher 2 read!
Thanks 4 sharing...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th April 2004, 11:16 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 503
Posted By vvenomouss
Hi... Dard-e-dil ke izhaar ka ik naam tha...

Hi...
Dard-e-dil ke izhaar ka ik naam tha 'SHAYRI'
Bekhabar sanam ne ise 'FUN' bana diya
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th April 2004, 11:07 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 735
Posted By vvenomouss
Complete Sher

Hi... sher is nice... but the complete sher is here....:
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd April 2004, 01:12 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,133
Posted By vvenomouss
Smile Hi Anjaja Rahi... Aapke yeh pasand aayi,,,...

Hi Anjaja Rahi...
Aapke yeh pasand aayi,,, bahut hi khushi hooowi... & thanks alot 4 ur appreciation...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st March 2004, 12:43 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,133
Posted By vvenomouss
Hi ek_aashique... hMmmm.... khair... bin...

Hi ek_aashique...
hMmmm.... khair... bin mushkilaat ke koi bhi cheez nahin milti..
bahut se cheezon ka saamna karne ka baad hi koi khushi milti hai...

'Hai mera zarf teri wafa se kahiin badh kar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st March 2004, 02:55 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,133
Posted By vvenomouss
Smile Thanks...

Hello 'roopali'
thanks alot 4 ur appreciation...
byee
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th March 2004, 12:19 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,107
Posted By vvenomouss
Hi...... nicee... KAL KHUDA NE MUJHSE POOCHA...

Hi......
nicee...
KAL KHUDA NE MUJHSE POOCHA
TU MUJHE AAJ KAL YAAD NAHIN KARTA
MAINE KAHA MERE SANAM MEIN BHI TO TU HAIN
TU KHUD HI TO MUJHSE BAAT NAHIN KARTA
Forum: Hindi/Urdu Lyrics 30th March 2004, 12:16 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,169
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello... hhmmm.. right... kya para aisa bhi...

Hello...
hhmmm.. right... kya para aisa bhi kuch ho jaayeee :( ....
Taakee caree & Allah Hafiz
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th March 2004, 12:10 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 690
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello.. bahut zabardast... har line dil ko...

Hello..
bahut zabardast... har line dil ko choo gayi...
Simply... 'zabardast'''
keep it up!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th March 2004, 11:51 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,133
Posted By vvenomouss
Hello.... mein bilkul theek hoon.... & how r...

Hello....
mein bilkul theek hoon.... & how r u... I hope u r fine too...
Thanks 4 ur reply...
take careee... & bye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 29th March 2004, 01:06 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 539
Posted By vvenomouss
Hi... hmm... Yamini Das ka kaafi acha sher...

Hi...
hmm... Yamini Das ka kaafi acha sher hai...
thanks 4 sharing
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 29th March 2004, 05:10 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,191
Posted By vvenomouss
w0w... just some lines... but I cant say wat they...

w0w... just some lines... but I cant say wat they mean 2 me...
thanks aloooot 4 sharing.
Forum: Hindi/Urdu Lyrics 28th March 2004, 11:15 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 464
Posted By vvenomouss
Sad Koi Naheee

ik gham ke siwa is duniya main
ab aur hamara koi naheen
tab dil ke saharay thay kiya kiya
ab dil ka sahara koi naheen
ik gham ke siwa is duniya main
..........
is dil ki kashti maujon main...
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