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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th May 2006, 02:16 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,144
Posted By Star
Pehle bhi

pehle bhi mila tha yaar mujhey
pehle bhi hooa tha pyaar mujhey

khamosh mohabbat pehle thi
bass tum sey hooa iqraar mujhey

us din sey tera mai ho gaya
jis din sey kaha, dildaar mujhey

ab...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 17th April 2006, 06:52 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,039
Posted By Star
chand din pehley hi suni hai, aur yeh kaafi achi...

chand din pehley hi suni hai, aur yeh kaafi achi ghazal hai...
aap please mujhey bata sakte hain key yeh ghazal kis ney gaahi hai?, yeh radio par aa rhi thi, i missed the singer's and writer's name
Forum: Aapki Shayri 3rd April 2006, 07:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,256
Posted By Star
Very good, central idea bohot hi acha hai ...

Very good,
central idea bohot hi acha hai
poem mai rawaani bhi hai
Azad nazam hai magar rawaani hai
very good keep it up
take care
Forum: Aapki Shayri 19th March 2006, 04:02 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,016
Posted By Star
mera naam Adil hai.... take care

mera naam Adil hai....
take care
Forum: Aapki Shayri 17th March 2006, 12:55 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,582
Posted By Star
jinab nice ji waqahi parh key bohot mazaa aaya,...

jinab nice ji
waqahi parh key bohot mazaa aaya, aap ne kitni yaadain taaza kar di hain, baharhaal merey liye bus wait nahi karti thi khud jaana parta tha, aur agar late ho gaye to naa poochiye!...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 15th March 2006, 01:11 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,016
Posted By Star
MashaALLAH kya andaaz hai, aur bohot khoobsoorat...

MashaALLAH kya andaaz hai, aur bohot khoobsoorat likha hai aap ney.
jis ko bhi paigham deeya hai, wo to yeh parh key hi mar jahey gaa bechaara/bechaari.........
alfaaz kaa chunaaho bohot acha hai,...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 15th March 2006, 01:04 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 742
Posted By Star
bohot khoob khayal hai..... 3rd line ko thora...

bohot khoob khayal hai.....
3rd line ko thora aur simple kar dain to aur bhi acha ho jahey gaa
take care
Forum: Aapki Shayri 13th March 2006, 02:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 808
Posted By Star
Aey Zindagi

hey guys i am posting a thread after a long time, i was away for a "while" .......

Kahan hai tu aey zindagi
Meri khushi, meri hansi

Khari rahi tu muntazir(waiting)
Meri nazar pari nahi

Jis...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 13th March 2006, 02:20 PM
Replies: 69
Views: 19,285
Posted By Star
Maikash ji.... Hum saath saath hain my id...

Maikash ji....
Hum saath saath hain
my id great_genius015@yahoo.com

take care
Forum: Aapki Shayri 13th March 2006, 02:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,881
Posted By Star
Achey logo Nice Guy kaa matlab hai key agar hum...

Achey logo
Nice Guy kaa matlab hai key agar hum log kohi topic choose kar lain, for example, "Sharaab(Beer)" hum log teams bana lain gey

aik team is key favour mai likhey gi, aur dosari is key...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th December 2005, 02:52 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Mohabbat meri yaktarfa thi, do tarfa nahi ...

Mohabbat meri yaktarfa thi, do tarfa nahi
Mohabbat mai us sey karta tha, wo nahi
Agar wo jaanti, to mujh sey mohabbat karti
Itna usey jaanta hoon, wo be-wafa nahi..........

Next "I"
Forum: Aapki Shayri 22nd December 2005, 03:52 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Ik phool jo khilaa tha, khil naa saka Ik...

Ik phool jo khilaa tha, khil naa saka
Ik mehboob jo mila tha, mil naa saka

Next "A"
Forum: Aapki Shayri 17th December 2005, 03:51 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 870
Posted By Star
Jinaab Faraaz Sahab Kya baat hai aap ki wah...

Jinaab Faraaz Sahab

Kya baat hai aap ki wah zabardast!
ALLAH hi to sab sey behtar dost hai

Apna khayal rakhiye gaa aur yoonhi likhtey rahiye
ALLAH hafiz
Forum: Aapki Shayri 15th December 2005, 03:40 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
ok O to bohot mushkil hain aur bohot din ho gaye...

ok O to bohot mushkil hain aur bohot din ho gaye hain kisi ney kohi reply nai di to kiyoon naa "i" jo O sey pehley hai us sey kohi shair likh deta hoon

Is duniya sey jo bhi jahe, wo naa waapis...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th December 2005, 03:34 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 613
Posted By Star
Parul ji jaan kar bohot khushi hooi key yeh aap...

Parul ji
jaan kar bohot khushi hooi key yeh aap ko pasand aayi, haan waqahi aisaa bohot kam log sochte hain, aur log apney maazi mai hi rehna pasand karte hain laikin phir bhi hamey doosere ki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th December 2005, 03:32 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 613
Posted By Star
Farhana ji aap kaa bohot shukriya, jaan kar...

Farhana ji
aap kaa bohot shukriya, jaan kar bohot khushi hoi key yeh aap ko pasand aayi......... bijahey hamey himmat harney key apney ird gird bhi dekhna chaahiye
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th December 2005, 03:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 613
Posted By Star
Garima ji nawazish shukriya, key aap ney apne...

Garima ji
nawazish shukriya, key aap ney apne waqt mai sey is thread ko time diya, jaan kar khushi hooi key yeh aap ko achi lagi

take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th December 2005, 04:15 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,079
Posted By Star
Nicely written and nicely done good job keep...

Nicely written and nicely done
good job
keep it up
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th December 2005, 03:32 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,155
Posted By Star
Jinab Ghayal sahab kaisey hain aap? aap ki to...

Jinab Ghayal sahab
kaisey hain aap? aap ki to kya baat hai maza aagaya parh key
liked it very much
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th December 2005, 03:27 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,080
Posted By Star
Manoj sahab kaise hain aap? kya likhaa hai aap...

Manoj sahab
kaise hain aap? kya likhaa hai aap ney wahhh mazaa aagaya...
mai to kitney hi dino sey aap key kalaam kaa wait kar rha tha .......... aik baar phir zabardast

khush rahiyeh
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th December 2005, 12:37 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 940
Posted By Star
Excellent work, liked it very much keep it up ...

Excellent work, liked it very much
keep it up
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th December 2005, 12:33 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 613
Posted By Star
Zara Socho To.......

Zindagi mai aksar aisa hota hai key hum jis sey mobabbat karte hain wo hamey chor jaata hai aur hum us ki yaad ko dil sey laga lete hain, baghair yeh jaaney key kohi aur bhi hamey aisey hi chaahata...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th December 2005, 12:08 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 980
Posted By Star
Amazing creation wonderful! keep it up friend ...

Amazing creation wonderful!
keep it up friend
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 10:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 658
Posted By Star
Is ghazal mai jo sab sey best hai wo yeh hai ...

Is ghazal mai jo sab sey best hai wo yeh hai

Hijr Ki Kaali Raat Main Kaise Kaise Loog
khaak Main Milke Khak Hue Tum Kya Jano
by anjels princess (sukoon)

yaqeen jano sukoon(i would like to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 03:51 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 666
Posted By Star
aap ki har post aik sey barh kar aik hai ghazal...

aap ki har post aik sey barh kar aik hai
ghazal mai wazan bhi bilkul darust hai aur alfaaz kaa chunaaho
bhi bohot khoob hai, kab sey ho rhi hai shaayari?

take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 03:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 578
Posted By Star
A1 shaandaar, to aap kaa takhalus "Sukoon" hai ...

A1 shaandaar, to aap kaa takhalus "Sukoon" hai
good keep it up
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 03:43 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 642
Posted By Star
Brilliant idea + brilliant creation very very...

Brilliant idea + brilliant creation
very very nice, bohot hi acha likha hai very good

take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 03:41 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 527
Posted By Star
hmmmmmm MashaALLAH bohot acha likha hai aap...

hmmmmmm MashaALLAH bohot acha likha hai aap ney......
liked it very much keep writing
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 03:36 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,588
Posted By Star
Farhana ji, kaisi hain aap umeed hai theek hon...

Farhana ji,
kaisi hain aap umeed hai theek hon gi.....
Insaan hurt kaisey hota hai kabhi aap ney yeh socha hai? agar nahi to mai bata deta hoon, Expectations sey..........
jab aap kisi sey kuch...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th December 2005, 03:22 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,514
Posted By Star
Very nice Roshni ji, bohot choo leney waala topic...

Very nice Roshni ji, bohot choo leney waala topic aap ney select keeya hai....... hamey apney beloved sey sabak haasil karna chaahiyeh jaisey wo aap key liye nahi rukaa hamey bhi us key liye nahi...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th December 2005, 06:28 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Naqsh terey sitaaron sey bana lete hain Phir...

Naqsh terey sitaaron sey bana lete hain
Phir apney khaabon mai saja letey hain
Letter is N
Forum: Aapki Shayri 3rd December 2005, 12:22 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Mai hi naadaan tha, jo tujh ko naa pehchaan saka ...

Mai hi naadaan tha, jo tujh ko naa pehchaan saka
Pyaar milta hai, nahi aur kisi ko aise
Meri nazron sey tu sharmaa key simat jaati hai
Mai ney dekhaa na kabhi aur kisi ko aise.

Letter is E
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd December 2005, 11:00 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 616
Posted By Star
Good very good keep it up

Good very good
keep it up
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd December 2005, 10:59 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 661
Posted By Star
Nice thinking Keep it up

Nice thinking

Keep it up
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd December 2005, 10:55 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 948
Posted By Star
very nice, bohot acha laga parh key jo aap ney...

very nice, bohot acha laga parh key jo aap ney likhaa hai

aur yeh aap ney kya likhaa hai?

ARRE aab ye kaisa sawaal hai
.................haan maana wo mera nahi
main uss jaisi sunder nahi ...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 2nd December 2005, 01:19 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Eid key din ham terey baghair khuwaar bohot hooey...

Eid key din ham terey baghair khuwaar bohot hooey
Bass is eid key naam sey baizaar bohot hooey

The last letter is Y

take care
Forum: Aapki Shayri 1st December 2005, 07:11 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Yaadon kaa samandar behta hai, kohi merey dil mai...

Yaadon kaa samandar behta hai, kohi merey dil mai rehta hai
Mujhey yaad bohot tum aatey ho, kohi mujh sey yeh sab kehta hai

alphabet is I
Forum: Aapki Shayri 1st December 2005, 02:52 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
Oonchey jab tum urtey they Hum neechey aahain...

Oonchey jab tum urtey they
Hum neechey aahain bhartey they
Jis din sey tumhey khaaya tha
Tumhaari talssh mai phirtey they


alphabet is Y
Forum: Aapki Shayri 1st December 2005, 01:50 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,195
Posted By Star
hmmmmmm so the last alphabe is R Rooh tarap...

hmmmmmm so the last alphabe is R

Rooh tarap jahey, jab tu saamney aahey
Dil machal jahey, jab tu saamney aahey

last alphabet is Y
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st December 2005, 01:34 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,597
Posted By Star
Nice very nice yaar kya baat hai juda hoke...

Nice very nice yaar kya baat hai

juda hoke bhi,tu mujhme samayi hai,
mere khwabon me tu phir chali aayi hai.
Zabardast

siwa tere ab meri aankhon ko........
to kuch bhi nahi deta dikhayi hai....
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