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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2003, 08:58 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 10,177
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Tulsika, Varinder, and Nida ji. Shukriya doston...

Tulsika, Varinder, and Nida ji. Shukriya doston aap sabke comments ka.

"Haan main bahut pareshaan hoon
dil bhi toota hai
kis se ab kya kahoon
khud apni kismat pe hairaan hoon"

Magar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 09:55 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 680
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Bahut hi achha likha hai dear aapne. I live...

Bahut hi achha likha hai dear aapne. I live close to ur place too. Likhte rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 09:48 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 10,177
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Question “Kyon mujhe pyar main dhoka diya”

“Kyon mujhe pyar main dhoka diya”

Haaye.. kyon tune pyar main dhoka diya
Kyon na sachha pyar tha mujhse kiya
Khamiyaan kaun si mujhme thi.n
Kyon meri wafaaon ka aisa sila hai diya

Humne to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 09:32 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 570
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Wah dear, kya khoob likha hai aapne bhi. ...

Wah dear, kya khoob likha hai aapne bhi.

"Kise Batayein Kitna Dard Hai Humne Paaya,
Bardi Hee Khushi Se Humne Ghum Ko Gale Lagaya,
Jisko Apna Samjha Usse Ne Toh Thukraya,
Rukh Tufaan Ka Na Ho...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 09:25 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,208
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Zeba ji, aapne bahut hi khoob likha hai. ...

Zeba ji, aapne bahut hi khoob likha hai.

"nashtar se chubhte hai be-chad-te hue
phir bhi hotoon par hasi saja kar chale

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st May 2003, 08:04 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 934
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Bahut hi khoob likha hai Zeba ji. ...

Bahut hi khoob likha hai Zeba ji.

"dard,zakham,bechainee,
kya-kya nahi hai seenay may
hai jism itna halka to,bharee mera dil kyoun hai"

such dil ka dard itna hai ke jism per yeh bojh ho...
Forum: Informative Stories 22nd April 2003, 08:52 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,081
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Dear it seems as if ur just hurting urself with...

Dear it seems as if ur just hurting urself with all this. I don't know about ur ambitions and family. I avoid using this type of language but, I would say that Cathy is a "Bitch..." ....

I...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd April 2003, 08:19 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 997
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne. Tarif ke liye...

Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne. Tarif ke liye shabd nahin dhoond pa rahi hoon. Likhte rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2003, 10:45 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,049
Posted By Dard ki daastan
bahut khoob likha hai aapne dear. likhte rahiye

bahut khoob likha hai aapne dear. likhte rahiye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th April 2003, 10:42 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 395
Posted By Dard ki daastan
“Dard-e-dil ka kya karen”

“Dard-e-dil ka kya karen”

dard-e-dil ko le jaaye kahan
isko ab kahin bhi sukoon aata nahin
pyar jisko kiya be-intihaan
kehta hai aaj w oh, main uske kabil nahin

maloom hota jo dil tod dega...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th April 2003, 08:47 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 692
Posted By Dard ki daastan
bahut sahi kaha dost, never karna pyar. Hamain...

bahut sahi kaha dost, never karna pyar. Hamain bhi apni awaaz main shamil kar lo dost, kehte hain hum bhi "never karna pyar" Shukria for writing very well.
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 18th April 2003, 08:41 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,065
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Punjabiboy, this is very well written ...

Punjabiboy, this is very well written

"Qaazni ne kaha humko sharaab chod do
Humne bhi keh diya tum namaaz chod do
Hakeem keh raha hai dil ke mareez ko
Apney is dard-e-dil ka ilaaz chod do"
...
Forum: Informative Stories 17th April 2003, 09:40 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,790
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hello dear, this is so sad that the person u...

Hello dear, this is so sad that the person u trust so much, actually deceives u. Personally, I hate these kind of people. But, I agree with Amanji's advice. You should not go down to her level. ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2003, 08:03 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,569
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Chand ji, waise to Damal ji ne sab kuchh hi keh...

Chand ji, waise to Damal ji ne sab kuchh hi keh diya hai. Such aapne bahut hi achha likha hai.

"Kuchh ulajhne lage the is tarah
Ke bas uljhe hi nazar aate the,
Ye mohobbat karke ey dil
Kabhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2003, 07:49 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 650
Posted By Dard ki daastan
shurkriya Varinder ji. ...

shurkriya Varinder ji.

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Damal ji. Sabse pehle aapka shukria karna chahungi. main aapke comments se kuch-kuch...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2003, 07:00 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 770
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Wah, bahut hi achha likha hai aapne. ...

Wah, bahut hi achha likha hai aapne.

'shaayad ye waqt humse koi chaal chal gaya
rishta wafa ka aur hi rangoN meiN dhal gaya
ashkoN ki chandini se thee behtar wo dhooP hi"

yeh lines mujhe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2003, 06:54 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 829
Posted By Dard ki daastan
aapne bahut hi achha likha hai, dard aapke geet...

aapne bahut hi achha likha hai, dard aapke geet main dikhai deta hai. Likhte rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th April 2003, 07:41 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 650
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Thumbs down “Khuda zalim ke saath hai”

“Khuda zalim ke saath hai”

Hamesha uski haar main meri haar shamil thi
Magar aaj hamain maar kar w oh khushi ke paas hai
Meri wafaon ka khoon karke
Khusiyon ka jaam bhi uske haath hai
Aaj w oh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th April 2003, 07:18 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 416
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hello Banno ji, now this one is perfect for my...

Hello Banno ji, now this one is perfect for my situation. Such bahut khoob kaha hai aapne....Hamain bhi bas narazagi hai apne aap se, aur bas apne wafa ka gum hai. Banno ji jab insaan had se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th April 2003, 07:13 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 567
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Banno ji, aapne bahut hi achha likha hai. I...

Banno ji, aapne bahut hi achha likha hai. I think it could be a gazal. magar yeh gazal nahin yeh geet nahin, yeh to aapki aawaz hai. Meri life ki situation thodi alag hai is samay, magar phir bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th April 2003, 04:59 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,031
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Shukria meena ji. aapko sher bhi bahut pasand...

Shukria meena ji. aapko sher bhi bahut pasand aaya mujhe...

"Na kisi apne ki arzoo aab, Na kisi baigane ki talash hai,
Mai to phool hoon tanhaiyon ka, Mujhe bas virane ki talash hai"

bahut...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th April 2003, 01:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 599
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Pinky ji. Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne. ...

Pinky ji. Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne.

"Log to apni khushiyo ke liye phool chahte hai,
Par hum dusro ke khatir kanto me jiye hai"

I like these two lines very much. Keep writing and :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th April 2003, 11:54 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 524
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Mahima ji, bahut hi achha likha hai aapne. ...

Mahima ji, bahut hi achha likha hai aapne.

"Gam badhta hi jaata hai, khatam to kya kam bhi nahin hota"

Likhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th April 2003, 10:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 602
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hi dost, aapne apne dard ko bahot hi khubsoorati...

Hi dost, aapne apne dard ko bahot hi khubsoorati se likha hai. Padh kar to aisa lagta hai ke aapko bhi koi pyar ke wade de kar dhoka de gaya hai. Achha tha jab main samajhti thi ke sirf mujhe hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th April 2003, 10:01 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 976
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Bahut sahi baat likhi hai apne zeba ji. Phir...

Bahut sahi baat likhi hai apne zeba ji. Phir zindagi to apne liye nahin, magar jinhe hum pyar karte hain... unke liye ji jaati hai. Likhte rahiyega.
Jai mata di
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th April 2003, 09:58 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 638
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Thumbs down “Barbaad kar diya tune”

“Barbaad kar diya tune”

Kal tak jo pyar tujhse kiya maine
Bahut acha sila uska hai diya tune
Sukriya teri bewafai ka
Mujhe barbaad kar diya tune

Shikayat tujhse kyon karoon
Tujhe to yeh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th April 2003, 09:50 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,031
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Shukriya Priya ji. Koshish karoongi aur achha...

Shukriya Priya ji. Koshish karoongi aur achha likhne ka.

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Rami ji aap ne kaha ki aap unki yadon ko dil se lagaye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th April 2003, 11:52 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 862
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hi Rutu Ji, wah bahoot khoob likha hai apne. ...

Hi Rutu Ji, wah bahoot khoob likha hai apne. lagta hai apki aur meri kahani bahot zyada milti zulti hai. Meri bhi aisi hi kahani hai. Likhte rahiyega.

Guzare hain mohabbat main aise mukaam se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th April 2003, 09:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 529
Posted By Dard ki daastan
wah Ghaafilji kya khoob likha hai aapne "yaa...

wah Ghaafilji kya khoob likha hai aapne

"yaa khudaa! maut na de aankheiN hi chhiin le
ab ye rashk-o-gham ka jahaN dekhaa nahiN jaata"

Bahut khoob. Likhte rahiye.
Jai mata di :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th April 2003, 09:35 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 656
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Thumbs down “Barbaad kar diya tune”

“Barbaad kar diya tune”
Kal tak jo pyar tujhse kiya maine
Bahut acha sila uska hai diya tune
Sukriya teri bewafai ka
Mujhe barbaad kar diya tune

Shikayat tujhse kyon karoon
Tujhe to yeh karna...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th April 2003, 07:32 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 524
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hello Wafa ji, thank-you for reading and ur...

Hello Wafa ji, thank-you for reading and ur comments. Koshish karoongi likhte rehne ki. Jai Mata Di :)


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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th April 2003, 09:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 749
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hello Priya Ji, such bahut khub likha hai...

Hello Priya Ji, such bahut khub likha hai aapne...

"Dil ko behlaaney ke liye tujhey bhul gaye ye khyaal acha hai
ashk aaye par duniya na dekhey is ke liye ye rumaal acha hai"

Duniya se ashk...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th April 2003, 09:06 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 524
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Ji haan Priya ji sahi kaha hai aapne agar pehle...

Ji haan Priya ji sahi kaha hai aapne agar pehle malum hota ke pyar main dhoka hai to hum aur aap kuch aur hi hote. Shukriya dost for posting a reply. Sorry i'm replying in long time. Lagta hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2003, 07:30 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,039
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne. "apne yaar ko...

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.

"apne yaar ko yaad kar ke kehta hai 'aman'
aazaad hone laga huuN maiN *zanjeer se aaj"

likhte rahiyega. Jai Mata Di :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2003, 07:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 402
Posted By Dard ki daastan
aaj dil pe koi

Doston yeh Lata Mangeshkar ji ka gaya hua geet hua. Aagar aap main se koi jaanta ho ke main kahan se download kar sakti hoon to please inform me. Mujhe yeh geet bahut pasand hai. One of my fav. ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2003, 07:18 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 796
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Hello mahek ji. very nice. Ek baat kehna...

Hello mahek ji. very nice. Ek baat kehna chhahti hoon. Kuchh log kehte hain ke duniya rulaye, usse to achha hai ke khud hi ro lo. Pata nahin dear aapki kya majboori rahi hogi, magar agar aapne...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2003, 07:08 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,031
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Shukria Amanji. Jab dil dukhta hai to shayri...

Shukria Amanji. Jab dil dukhta hai to shayri apne aap hi ban jati hai, bas maine to aap sabke samne rakhne ki koshish ki thi... aur main bahut shukr guzaar hoon aap sab doston ko jo aap sabne mujhe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th April 2003, 12:41 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,896
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Bahut achha likha hai aapne aur sahi baat hai ke ...

Bahut achha likha hai aapne aur sahi baat hai ke
Ab wohi sHakHs hamen gunehgaar kehne laga
kiya tha pyaar maine jinki RaZa ke Saath
This is very nice. Jai Mata Di
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th April 2003, 12:36 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,031
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Shukriya doston jo aap sabko yeh meri koshish dil...

Shukriya doston jo aap sabko yeh meri koshish dil ka haal sunane ki pasand aayi. I will keep trying this. Thanks again. Jai Mata Di:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd April 2003, 09:09 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,031
Posted By Dard ki daastan
Thumbs down “Bewafayi yaad aati hai”

Doston ek baar aur koshish ki hai apne dil ke zakhmo ko shayri banane ki...I hope ke aap sab me se kisi ka bhi aesa haal na ho.


“Bewafayi yaad aati hai”

Dil...
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