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Forum: Pyaar Bhari SMS Shayri 18th June 2010, 02:21 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 5,781
Posted By Musafeer
Simply put, its amazing! I look forward to more...

Simply put, its amazing! I look forward to more from you!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 1st April 2010, 11:32 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,474
Posted By Musafeer
I really like content and structure. Keep it up!

I really like content and structure. Keep it up!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd July 2009, 01:34 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,620
Posted By Musafeer
this is real nice, I havent come on here in...

this is real nice, I havent come on here in several years but it is plesent to come back to this... you made my day!
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 9th June 2004, 02:00 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 921
Posted By Musafeer
Brother, you never seem so stop amazing me with...

Brother, you never seem so stop amazing me with your poems. Good job! Look forward to reading your other poems.

Eik Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 9th June 2004, 01:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,995
Posted By Musafeer
Brother that is another ourstanding poem that you...

Brother that is another ourstanding poem that you have written, I am very impressed by your thoughts and poems. Look forward to reading your next poem.

Eik Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 2nd June 2004, 03:19 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 532
Posted By Musafeer
Sad Yadein

"Yadein"


Bhulana chateh hain hum woh waden,
Woh lamhein, woh muskurahat, woh yadein.

Tum to kisi aur ki ho chali ho,
Hum abhi bhi bhulein nahin hain woh baatein.

Dil lagna aur lagana...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th May 2004, 01:57 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 996
Posted By Musafeer
Very well, eh Dost bhout sahi likha hai aap ne......

Very well, eh Dost bhout sahi likha hai aap ne... Dil ki baat labon peh le-aiy aap .


Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th May 2004, 01:54 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,078
Posted By Musafeer
WOW, Brother I love your poetry, I actually look...

WOW, Brother I love your poetry, I actually look forward to your posts, your poems seem to come from the heart, and I believe that that is the one thing that makes me like your poetry... Keep it up...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th May 2004, 01:45 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,105
Posted By Musafeer
Angry hummm, I guess I didnt know that you could find...

hummm, I guess I didnt know that you could find hatred at a site where people are just expressing what they feel... damn, if you dont got anything beneficial to say then keep it to your damn self.......
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 26th April 2004, 03:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 931
Posted By Musafeer
its nice and to the point...I like it, keep...

its nice and to the point...I like it, keep writing


Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 19th April 2004, 01:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 668
Posted By Musafeer
Eh dost, aap neh bilkul sahi kaha hai, shahid...

Eh dost, aap neh bilkul sahi kaha hai, shahid islye yeh sher abtak asliat meh badla nahi, magar dost khabi kabhi jab zindagi ghum seh bhar jaey toh ayse khayalat dil meh ate hi hain our yeh bhout...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th April 2004, 01:04 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 668
Posted By Musafeer
Sad Apna Khuun

*This poem is about death, I know, but it also shows the love a person has for his mother *


Yeh sher humne likha hai eikh admi peh joh khudkushi karaha hai our akri kuch lamoh meh apni ma se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2004, 12:56 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 343
Posted By Musafeer
Apna Khuun

Yeh sher humne likha hai eikh admi peh joh khudkushi karaha hai our akri kuch lamoh meh apni ma se baat karaha hai...

"Apna Khuun"

Apne khuun ke dyre meh hum duub ke mar-rehe hain,
Eh Khuda,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st March 2004, 01:16 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 764
Posted By Musafeer
That was great, you write beautifully. I look...

That was great, you write beautifully. I look forward to readign more from you. Take care.

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 27th March 2004, 03:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 991
Posted By Musafeer
I like it, good job... I dont know why but i find...

I like it, good job... I dont know why but i find it a little funny...

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 27th March 2004, 03:05 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 522
Posted By Musafeer
i like it, good job...

i like it, good job...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th March 2004, 01:45 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 867
Posted By Musafeer
Wow, I am speechless, I dont have any clue of...

Wow, I am speechless, I dont have any clue of what to say. I like your poem alot and I hope that you keep writing the way you do. Again that was great.

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th March 2004, 01:39 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 722
Posted By Musafeer
I like your poetry, the first two are very well...

I like your poetry, the first two are very well phrased, keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th March 2004, 01:37 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 668
Posted By Musafeer
It nice and simple, I like it... Good job! ...

It nice and simple, I like it... Good job!

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 18th March 2004, 01:34 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,163
Posted By Musafeer
My friend you have again written something...

My friend you have again written something wonderful, I geatly admire your poetry and look forward to read what ever you have next to offer... Take care and keep writting...

Your Friend,
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th March 2004, 12:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 613
Posted By Musafeer
good job, i like it alot.... keep writing ...

good job, i like it alot.... keep writing

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th March 2004, 01:02 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 883
Posted By Musafeer
Wow... apne to lafs hi ghum hoge... likthe rehna...

Wow... apne to lafs hi ghum hoge... likthe rehna aap...

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 11th March 2004, 12:58 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 928
Posted By Musafeer
bhout khoob lika hai aap ne... hume bhout acha...

bhout khoob lika hai aap ne... hume bhout acha laga hai... likte rhena aap...

MUSAFEER
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th February 2004, 02:28 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 493
Posted By Musafeer
Love Phir Chidi Raat...

Hey everyone, I was sitting with a friend and he told me this, I was blown away...

"Phir Chidi Raat"

Phir chidi raat, baat phoolown ki,

Raat hai ya barsaat phoolown Ki,

Aap ka saath,...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 24th February 2004, 02:06 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 665
Posted By Musafeer
It is nice, keep it up.

It is nice, keep it up.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 19th February 2004, 11:56 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 656
Posted By Musafeer
Its nice my friend, I like the second one. Good...

Its nice my friend, I like the second one. Good job!

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th February 2004, 01:06 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 9,235
Posted By Musafeer
Sofia Jee, Aapne bhout acha lika hai....

Sofia Jee,

Aapne bhout acha lika hai. Bhout dukh hai aap ki sher mein. Lafs hi nahin hai mere paas our kuch bolne kelye. Bhout khoob. Sher likte rhena aap.

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 18th February 2004, 12:56 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 689
Posted By Musafeer
Wow... Kya likha hai, waa waa. Lagta hai aap ko...

Wow... Kya likha hai, waa waa. Lagta hai aap ko kafi ghusa hai kisi peh... Wow. Im speachless...

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 18th February 2004, 12:52 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,060
Posted By Musafeer
Jineh yeh lika hai, unko mere taraf se salam...

Jineh yeh lika hai, unko mere taraf se salam dena, unone bhout ahca lika hai. Dil peh baat lagi hai.

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 18th February 2004, 12:49 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 745
Posted By Musafeer
Acha laga hai, sahi likha hai apne, kabi kabi...

Acha laga hai, sahi likha hai apne, kabi kabi sirf dosti hi hoti hai...

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 18th February 2004, 12:46 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 833
Posted By Musafeer
Wow, that is great. Bhout acha likah hai apne....

Wow, that is great. Bhout acha likah hai apne. The last two lines were wonderful.

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 18th February 2004, 12:42 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,362
Posted By Musafeer
Very very nice, i can completely understand what...

Very very nice, i can completely understand what you are saying and agree as well. Keep writing like you did now because the outcome is good.


Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th February 2004, 12:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 614
Posted By Musafeer
Mushkan, Shukrya aap ka bhout, muhje...

Mushkan,

Shukrya aap ka bhout, muhje bhout khushi hai key koi our bhi hain joh mhuje samaj saktey hain. Yeh zindagi aaj kaal kuch ajeeb si lagne lagi hai, dunya keh rang hi urgay hain....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th February 2004, 04:59 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 614
Posted By Musafeer
Aman, Shukrya aap ka bhout bhout....

Aman,

Shukrya aap ka bhout bhout. Kushi hui hai hume ke aap jistra dost bhi hain hamare pass. Mere dost aap ki baat hum khayalown meh rakhengey, our jab vazan kandeh mein zada lagega to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 17th February 2004, 01:22 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 594
Posted By Musafeer
Wow... that was great ....

Wow... that was great ....
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 17th February 2004, 01:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 895
Posted By Musafeer
Thank you Shimul Jee, I understand where you are...

Thank you Shimul Jee, I understand where you are comming from, in my essence though I felt, when I wrote this, that when a person has lost the reason for living then what keeps them going and what...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th February 2004, 03:38 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 895
Posted By Musafeer
Sad Dil Ki Jang

Zindagi humse tez bhagri hai, lagraha hai ke hum har rehein hain...

"Dil Ki Jang"

Aaj zindagi ki jang hum hargey hain,
Zinda hai jism magar andar se margey hain,

Is mehfil meh hum unka haat...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th February 2004, 03:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 614
Posted By Musafeer
Sad Dil Ki Jang

Dil peh aaj bouht wazan tah...



Aaj zindagi ki jang hum hargey hain,
Zinda hai jism magar andar se margey hain

Is mehfil meh hum unka haat khogey hain
Dhund dhund key hum ab pagal hogey...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 16th February 2004, 01:54 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 598
Posted By Musafeer
nice

I like it, keep writing..

Musafeer
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th February 2004, 01:10 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 494
Posted By Musafeer
Love Sweet Cupid

"Sweet Cupid"

Sweet cupid help me open her desire,
your work may now begin,
if our age becomes any higher,
then it will be to late to her desire get in.

Like when winter storms become...
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