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Forum: Punjabi Poetry 22nd October 2013, 09:17 PM
Replies: 0
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Posted By D33P
Profit

jeho g madam di mang c,rang rangna pya laalaariyaan nu.
bandar vichara nachda reha,profit hoia madaariyaan nu

o kahda safar c, jis vich gwachea na gea.

bakaayea modo k na, fikar reha...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 27th September 2013, 09:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,788
Posted By D33P
thanks ji sarea da.... tilkji koi permission di...

thanks ji sarea da.... tilkji koi permission di lod nahi, sab tuhada hi hai.... :)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 19th December 2012, 11:01 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,788
Posted By D33P
tameez

ik supna hai...
ajeeb hai..
aap e kehnda main tuttna hai...
badnaseeb hai....

eh rooh hai, mareej hai.
jina chir ik reejh hai.

chaaha ta agg ugal dea.
par ,..tameez hai.
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 21st October 2012, 05:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,039
Posted By D33P
garari

ik gal di main khoj kiti, rabb di har gal ch garari hundi a.
banda jina chnga hunda, kismat saali oni maadi hundi a.

tutda hona dil ik adhi var harek da zindgi vich.
sade di ta nit hi ethe...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 20th October 2012, 11:51 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,501
Posted By D33P
sirrra...keep it up ..........................

sirrra...keep it up ..........................
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 12th October 2012, 07:48 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,547
Posted By D33P
tutte khamb

adke har kandiyali thor nal ,reshmi socha di bas leer reh jandi a.
mere supnea de raah ch har var, aake meri taqdeer kheh jandi a.

shadea ni khehda kde,aas rakhi sda poori.
maapno ni htea ,kde...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 10th December 2011, 11:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,699
Posted By D33P
thanks tilak ji...jroor milange kde.... thanks...

thanks tilak ji...jroor milange kde....
thanks palli ji...:)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 10th December 2011, 11:47 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,438
Posted By D33P
:) ...keep it...

:) ...keep it up......................................................................................
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 10th December 2011, 11:45 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,558
Posted By D33P
:) sohna likhia..bt plz commas te proper spacing...

:) sohna likhia..bt plz commas te proper spacing kria kro...... keep up the gud work..
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 10th December 2011, 11:43 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,666
Posted By D33P
kaim aa bai g...i loved it...bt thoda thik tra...

kaim aa bai g...i loved it...bt thoda thik tra post kro..... really liked ur first poem...keep it up... u gonna rock soon.. :)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 7th September 2011, 10:49 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,699
Posted By D33P
Talking Lokpal bill

LOKPAL BILL .

kde poora soka,kde poora meenh.

kite ujde khet,kite dheh gyi neeh.

kre climate changes abrupt tu.

hoia firda a poora e corrupt tu.
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th September 2011, 04:42 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,022
Posted By D33P
thanx ji sab nu...:) ... ... ... ...

thanx ji sab nu...:) ... ... ... .... ,...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 5th August 2011, 10:33 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,022
Posted By D33P
thanks ji sab nu... .........................:) ..

thanks ji sab nu... .........................:) ..
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:32 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,805
Posted By D33P
wah......super like :). . . . . . .. . .. . .. .....

wah......super like :). . . . . . .. . .. . .. .. .
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:31 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 4,410
Posted By D33P
nice teji ji.......keep writing...i liked it..:)

nice teji ji.......keep writing...i liked it..:)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:29 PM
Replies: 20
:)
Views: 3,117
Posted By D33P
nice and simple.............. keep it up...and...

nice and simple.............. keep it up...and lolz u just put a smiley instead of writing the name of the poem....it seems like that ur happy by writing this sad poem :P...anyway good work... keep...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:23 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,324
Posted By D33P
:)...................................................

:)............................................................................. .
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:21 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,694
Posted By D33P
goood likhea ji...............keep it...

goood likhea ji...............keep it up...................
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:19 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,552
Posted By D33P
kaim gazal aa ji...likhde...

kaim gazal aa ji...likhde rho.......................................................
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:17 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,794
Posted By D33P
good..keep it up...

good..keep it up vimal.....................................................
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th August 2011, 11:13 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 4,623
Posted By D33P
kaim likhea 22 g....likhde rho

kaim likhea 22 g....likhde rho
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 15th January 2011, 10:56 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,726
Posted By D33P
thnx arsh,lovleen ,mittal...........te chahal 22...

thnx arsh,lovleen ,mittal...........te chahal 22 g.......hun shad ta eh sb kuj....1-2 singers nu song dite c..jo jaldi e release honge....... may be ese saal..... so hor kuj ni sade kol..i hv quit...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 16th November 2010, 08:59 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,726
Posted By D33P
thanx balraj,kamal and...

thanx balraj,kamal and arsh..................srry arsh g...i hv quit writing..........jo v hai ethe e post kita hoia.. and thanx for reading me,and liking my poetry :)
may god bless you :)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th October 2010, 10:37 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 35,730
Posted By D33P
improvement hoi a rashmi ji.....keep writing...:)

improvement hoi a rashmi ji.....keep writing...:)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th October 2010, 10:35 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 7,180
Posted By D33P
last lines are awesome.................congrats...

last lines are awesome.................congrats to that person who wrote this beauty...and i wish k osdi udeek mukke
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th October 2010, 10:32 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,569
Posted By D33P
bahut sohna likhia...awesome..har lafz agg...

bahut sohna likhia...awesome..har lafz agg hai..keep writing
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th October 2010, 10:29 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,331
Posted By D33P
kandiaa'n nu koi gall nahi launda....kandiaa'n di...

kandiaa'n nu koi gall nahi launda....kandiaa'n di joon kuj es tra hi likhi hundi hai......... :(
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 6th October 2010, 10:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,074
Posted By D33P
ji bht vdia hovega j sdc meet hoje.. ik var aauna...

ji bht vdia hovega j sdc meet hoje.. ik var aauna e aaukha...bt sare try jroor krio..j aa skde hoe ta kuj yaada leke jaoge mithia....tilk ji tsi eh topic shuru krke chnga kita..bt main dekh reha kuj...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 20th August 2010, 10:49 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,738
Posted By D33P
thnx sunita g,,and ababbu g..mehrbani....bas shyd...

thnx sunita g,,and ababbu g..mehrbani....bas shyd sahi ja nai likh skia ,,ehsaas ta bahut pyare ne..........ki dsa
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 16th July 2010, 10:10 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,375
Posted By D33P
shukria rajinder ji..i dnt write anymore..eh...

shukria rajinder ji..i dnt write anymore..eh purani kavita c......and shukria...dilpreet ji ..mehrbani 4 reading me.
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 16th July 2010, 10:08 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,086
Posted By D33P
ji rajinder ji fer oh lok galat ne na jo shikayta...

ji rajinder ji fer oh lok galat ne na jo shikayta krde ne........tsi shayd gurdas maan ji da oh song sunea hovega " heer"..osde kuj bol es tra ne...."tere jog da ki fyda j sanjog hi na...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 14th July 2010, 11:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,086
Posted By D33P
hi.....maaf krio rajinder g..ethe main kavita te...

hi.....maaf krio rajinder g..ethe main kavita te nahi..kavi di soch te ashemati karn ja reha....it leads towards pessimism.........rabb ne ta dunia bht vdia bnai hai ji...bas dekhan da nazria har ik...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 5th July 2010, 10:52 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,454
Posted By D33P
bahut khoob ji...tuhanu pad k mera v ji kr aaya k...

bahut khoob ji...tuhanu pad k mera v ji kr aaya k kuj likha...bt nai likhna...:) keep it up.....
har sach nu ujagar kardo...har boond nu sagar kardo....:)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 4th July 2010, 07:44 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,375
Posted By D33P
thnks rashmi tsi aapna keemti sma kad k padia...

thnks rashmi tsi aapna keemti sma kad k padia mainu....nale font ji agge to clear rakhunga..es da theme kuj es tra da c..ta lagia k pink font shyd vdia lgu pyar shabad lyi...bt agge to khyal rakhu...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 2nd July 2010, 10:09 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,244
Posted By D33P
hmmmm....thoda hor better ho skda c..thoda...

hmmmm....thoda hor better ho skda c..thoda inspirational,motivational bnaunde ta behtar hunda i think.......kioki eh sirf tsi aapni hi gall kr rhe ho..j esnu sab di gall bnaunde ta sab nu vdia lagna...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 2nd July 2010, 07:11 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,375
Posted By D33P
thnks preet,gazzal,te satikaryog...

thnks preet,gazzal,te satikaryog tilkji....mehrbani shukria...hun ta main likhna shadia hoia..bdi mushkil nal shadia..ehta pehla de e kuj poems ne...bt thanx alot tsi read kite :)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 2nd July 2010, 07:09 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,628
Posted By D33P
wow...sohna likhia as usaual...keep it up ji :)

wow...sohna likhia as usaual...keep it up ji :)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 2nd July 2010, 07:08 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,878
Posted By D33P
wow...welcome dilpreet ji..bht hi sohni entry...

wow...welcome dilpreet ji..bht hi sohni entry kiti hai...nale bahut different soch hai...khushi hoi pad k...te please ese trah sohna likhde rho..te saccha likhde raho..rabb tuhanu jaldi tarkiyaan...
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 2nd July 2010, 07:06 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,503
Posted By D33P
sohna likhia ji...gud wrk...keep it up...:)

sohna likhia ji...gud wrk...keep it up...:)
Forum: Punjabi Poetry 2nd July 2010, 07:03 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 7,495
Posted By D33P
wow..vdia likhia ji...sach likhia...chnga...

wow..vdia likhia ji...sach likhia...chnga likhia...
par thoda ja dhyaan hor deo...means words nu thoda ja hor proper arrange kro..thoda time la k jive kise vishe te thesis likhna hove...main aap ta...
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