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achcha kiya........... -
20th October 2004, 06:09 PM
darasal maine hi kaha tha ki aap aisa koi article likhe jis mein ghazal ko cmpose karne ke liye zaroorri aspects mention kiye ho.........aapne wakai kabil-e-tareef kaam kiya hai...ab ye batayei ki
"zindagi bemani si
suni aakhon mein pani si" mein radeef kya hai agar nahin hai to phir "aani si" kya kafia hai, ya jaisa aapne kaha ki gair-muradaf sher hai .
nida fazli saheb ka ye sher to suna hi hoga
"jab kisi se koi gila rakhna
samne apne aeena rakhna"
ismein kafiaa radeef ya jo bhi aap ise kahen batae...
umeed hai aap naumeed na kareinge...
love n ragrds
usne chukar mujhe pathar se insan kiya
muddaton baad meri aankhon mein aansoon aaye
dr.bashir badr
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