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Originally Posted by aadeil
mera sher....
daar-us-suruur* ka daar-o-rasan ham-jaliis* hua
phir bhii kadaa-e-yaar me.n be-shakl mai.n hua
daar-us-suruur = house of intoxication (mae-kadaa)
ham-jaliis = constant companion
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Aadeil sahab ... pooree ki pooree ghazal hi shaandaar hai aur ye sher bhi bahaut khoob !! Waah sahab "daar us suroor" aur "daar o rasan" ki kya tarkeeb ki hai !! aur un ko ham-jaliis keh ke to kya lutf paida kiya !!! Just Superb !!!
Ek guzaarish hai aap se. Kyunki yahaan maqasad lutf-e-sukhan ke saath saath ilm-e-sukhan haasil karne ka bhi hai, to meri ye darkhwaast hai ki aap agar, zehmat na ho to, is sher ki mukhtasar si sharah kar sakein. Just a small explanation, jis se sabhi members par ye sher pooree tarah se ayaan hi sake aur wo is ke zariye kuchh seekh sakein. Aap ke khoobsurat alfaaz aur gehree fiqr ek achchha mauka dete hain humein kuchh seekhne ka.
Dheron duaon ke saath .... Zarraa