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7th July 2014, 08:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by zidd View Post
Kisko bhala dikhate ho daar o rasan ka khauff
Dil se abhi gayaa hi kaha baankpan ka khauff

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Kya tegh e ulfataaN ke qayamat si aa bane
Kya tegh e ulfat ab ke qayamat si aa bane

Hum pahle zer e daar the daar o rasan liye
Hum pahle meherbaa huye daar o rasan liye
hum khud hi meherbaa huye daar o rasan liye
khud pahle meherbaa huye daar o rasan liye

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practice sher hai isliye sari exercise yaha rakh raha hu zarra sirji.

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ulfataaN par feedback invited hai

saare ke saare permutation and combination too good hain sir jee.... bahot hi khoob har sher hai aur khaaskar ke pahle waalaa....

ulfataaN bilkul nayaa lafz mujhe nazar aay hai magar iske istemaal me kahin bhi mujhe awkward nahi lag raha hai and quite matching with the situation...

Shukriyaaa

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