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25th May 2003, 04:16 PM

namaste.. meena..ji..

bahut hi accha likha hai apnee... padh kar meri... jaban chup si hoogai .. hai samaj nai ata iski tareef kaise karun..bahut hi accha.. likhe hai apne..specially these lines..-->

Tum ne yunh munh fer liya hai..
Jaise kabhi pahchan n thhi
Aur ham hai ki raah maie aankhe
Bichhayae hai....
Jaane kya baat hai...
Yah kis goonah ki saja hai
Jo hamne sar jookaye kubul ki
Sirf is liyae ki.....????

bahut khoob.. aise hi likhte rahiye...


Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
   
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