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27th May 2003, 01:11 PM

Yah kis goonah ki saja hai
Jo hamne sar jookaye kubul ki
Sirf is liyae ki.....????
Yah aapne soonaai hai

Wah Meena ji,bahut hi achhi nazm likhi hai aur kahaa kar aakhri kuchh lines..

Aap bahut achha likhti hain aur sabse badi baat hai aap dil se likhti hain..tabhi to aapka likha dil ko chuu jaata hai..

Likhte rahiye
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