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friendnidhi · **hello -** 28th November 2004, 11:40 AM

Hello Acharya ji,
apko treplies is liya nahi milte because you are always making a new thread try to continue the ol d thread with a new subject line.
her to apka bahut pyara hai,

woh roshni kya jo mohabbat ko roshan kare
dad to tab denge jab pyar katne walon ko roshan kare

Woh pyar kya jo ek chingari se jal jaye
dad to tab denge jab age mein jal kar woh sona ban jaye

aur woh pyar kya jo pyar se pukarne bad hi aye
dad to jab denge jab woh hamare bare mein khayal hi kar rahein ho
aur hum ekdam se uske samne pahunch jaye

soryy i did not want to ruin yr shayri, but it was just a modification, hope you dont mind

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friendnidhi Registered User Offline Posts: 962 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Delhi Rep Power: 28	hello - 28th November 2004, 11:40 AM Hello Acharya ji, apko treplies is liya nahi milte because you are always making a new thread try to continue the ol d thread with a new subject line. her to apka bahut pyara hai, woh roshni kya jo mohabbat ko roshan kare dad to tab denge jab pyar katne walon ko roshan kare Woh pyar kya jo ek chingari se jal jaye dad to tab denge jab age mein jal kar woh sona ban jaye aur woh pyar kya jo pyar se pukarne bad hi aye dad to jab denge jab woh hamare bare mein khayal hi kar rahein ho aur hum ekdam se uske samne pahunch jaye soryy i did not want to ruin yr shayri, but it was just a modification, hope you dont mind Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye............... Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...."