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8th September 2014, 10:29 AM
Shoaibhai,
uljhan ye hai ki aapkii iis ghazal pe daad kahaaN se shuruu karuuN aur kahaaN pe ruk jaauuN......
Ab agar aur sitam hoNge to mar jaaeNge,
khaa-ma-khaa ham se hunarmand guzar jaaeNge.
laajavaab matlaa..... khayaal-aNgez......
wo jo kahte hain zamaane me maseehaa khud ko,
mere zakhmoN ko jo dekhenge muqar jaaeNge.
Aaj ke daur me apnoN se ummeedeN rakh kar,
ham sare aam nigaahoN se utar jaaeNge.
tere dar se bhi sakhaawat jo na mil paaegii,
tere maNgte mere mahboob kidhar jaaeNge.
ek hairat-angez sach..... aur kya khub surat bayaanaat.....
ashq bahte hain to bah jaane do rukhsaaroN pe,
aapke gham ke shaguufe to nikhar jaaeNge.
ek nazar uth gayee jo aapki jaanib meree,
aap khushboo se hawaaoN me bikhar jaaenge.
behad khubsurat ashaar... nuktachinii aur aag se pur.......
ham hain wo raah ke chal deN to ufaq tak jaaeN,
ek tum tak jo chalenge to thahar jaaenge.
superb word play.... and superb relation of philosophical and practical pragmatism....
wo jo ghazloN me teraa naam likhaa karte they,
kisne socha thaa miyaaN Shaad bhi Dar jaaenge
waaaaahhhh!!
kamaal hai, bhai......................
iis ghazal pe dherON dheroN daad......................
duaaoN ke saath..
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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