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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
kabhi hooN MaiN daastaan-e-mohabbhat
kabhi ranjishon ki wajah hooN MaiN
dafn hooN kahiN sannaate jaisa
kahin raakh se uthtaa dhuaa hooN MaiN
Waah waah waah.. bahot khoob, bahot khooB.. kamaal ke aashar hai bhai.. padhkar bahot Mazaa aaya.... Daad qubool kijiyega.. Upar mentioned sher ne to jaan hi nikaal di thii... Mashallah...
Shaad...
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Shaad bhai - khoob nabz pakadnaa jaante hai aap, ji haan bilkul yun kahiye ki is zara si koshish ke dil par haath rakh diya hai aapna.
apne likhe ko waise to compare karna gunaah hoga par yeh sher is nazm mein mera bhi behad pasandida hai.
YunHi Saath dete RaHiYeGaa..
aapka apnaa