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Originally posted by musharrafhusain
meri behna
apni kotahi per shirmandgi ke saath haazir hoon.
kem mayegi ka ehsaas hai.
khair, tum ne yeh ghazel bohat khoobsurat aur bhai ke mizaaj se hem-ahang ho ker kahi hai, is liye mujhe to pasand aanaa hi hai.
yeh voh tarz e bayaan hai jo mujhe pasand aataa hai.
isi tarah likhti raho, jug jug jiyo, aur khoob khush raho yehi bhai ki dua hai.
kisi dost ka shayr apni behan ki nazer kerta hoon
"QASEM KHUDA KI MOHABBAT NAHEEN AQEEDAT HAI"
"DIYAAR E DIL MEIN BOHAT EHTIRAAM HAI TERA"
Ejazat chahta hoon , apna bohat khayal rakhna
musharrafhusain
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QASEM KHUDA KI MOHABBAT NAHEEN AQEEDAT HAI"
"DIYAAR E DIL MEIN BOHAT EHTIRAAM HAI TERA"
kitna pyaara sher hai bhayyia...
aur aapne is nikkammi behan ki nazar kiya...is tohfe ko zindagi bhar yaad rakhoongi...aapko ghazal pasand aayee...khushkismeti hai meri...ab jaa kar aapki advice, aapki tanqeed ka asar dikhaayi de raha hai...aage bhi zaroor mujhe raaste pe laate rahiegaa...apko tau malum hai badi jaldi gadbad kar deti hoon...
aur bhayyia jo aapne shuru mein sharmindagi zaahir kee...mujhe bilkul achha nahin laga...aapne kaha tau thaa ki kaam zyada hai aur office hours kam...so aapki masruufiyat se wakif tau thee hi...aage se iss tarah ka lehja at least mere saath mat istemaal kiya karein...