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28th October 2006, 11:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan View Post
Dilip saheb namaskaar....aapki nazm parhi our bahoot achha laga....aapne apne toh ahsaasat batla diye...shayad woh kya kehna chahe....uska kya.....bahoot hi sunder nazm dost....


Tumhare prati mera samarpan hi meri nadaani....dil ko choo sa gaya....

lekin iske jawaab mein main kutchh likhne ki Gustaakhi chahoonga...


Kyuin karein gila unki be-wazeh judayi ka
kutchh toh mile sila hamein apni is wafayii ka.


Harash

ji harsha sahab
meri likhi nazam ki koi line aapke dil ko choo gayi main aapka dil se kayal ho gaya......... wakai aapki is tarif se mujhe aage likhen ka housla mila hai
shukriya aapka
dilip


" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab


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mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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