16th January 2006, 02:22 PM
Door reh kar bhi tujh se juda ho kar bhi
tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga
Itne faslay mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke mazay
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga
Waaaaahhh...khoobsurat bayaani hai..!
Silsalay teri yaadun ke phailay hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga
Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhalay teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga
Kya baat hai...!
Kaise kahun tere bin dahsti hai mujh ko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein raat-jaga karna mujhe acha laga
Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gaii
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga
Waaaaaaaahhhh...tooo good an expression..!
Faslay mitt na paaein ge in dooriun ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga
Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.
beautifulll...!
Mehul,
Haev u written this? I never thot u cud write this beautiful... Thsi one is just fabulous... har sher har alfaaz khoobsurat hai....Bahut hi accha flow bhi hai... Sach me yeh bahut khoobsurat hai...mer daad kubool akrna dil se...!
U can write really very well...Aise hi likhte raho...Do TC...!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
Last edited by Pulkit_gupta; 16th January 2006 at 02:27 PM..
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