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22nd January 2013, 05:10 PM

Thoda sa main bhi kahna chahta hun.... Shayari ka jo bhi grammar hai.. Aur zubaan ka jo bhi hai... Follow karna hi hoga... Aur agar koe nuks agar arooz mai hai to wo nuks hai hi... Chahe ghalib main ne bhi ghalti ki ho... Akhir shayar shayri se bada to ni ho sakta.. Ab dikkat ye hai ki.. Shayyri kis zubaan mai hai kahna 100% mushkil hai.... Urdu shayri .. Hindi shayri... Ya hindustaani shayri ...

Aur ik baat ki ghazal momin in sabke zamane main shayri k kayde ya arooz poori tarah samne nahi aaya tha.. Shutrgurba... Ustaad daagki khoj hai..
Aur daag hi ki shayri ek bharpoor sanad maani jaati hai..

Ab ye to humpe depend hai hum kis tarah likhna chahte hai.. Jite ji to hum misaalen de denge
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