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12th September 2018, 12:11 PM
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Originally Posted by maikasH
raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar
aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN
maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN
tasleem* = Accept
maikash
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wahhhhhh....Maikash ji, aapke to 2 misre hi poori gazal barabar lagte haiN, bahut khoob likha hai "maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN" wahhhh.
poori gazal bhi jaldi pesh kijiye...intejaar hai besabri se.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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