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29th May 2010, 10:35 AM
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Originally Posted by aakash4u View Post
kavita jee...

aapki ghazal ke ehsaas bahut seedhey or saaf hain..
jo dil pe asar karne me kamyaab rahe..

jaise ki abhi shuruaat hai to ghazal me nikhaar wakt ke sath hi aayega..
par ye koshish bhi bahut khoob rahi..

mujhe ghazal likhne ka koi tajurba nahi hai isliye hum jyada nhi keh sakenge

likhti rahiye aise hi

bhagwan aapki kalam ko rawaangi de
aakash

Shukriya Aakash ji,
bilkul sahi farmaaya aapne ki gazal me nikhaar wakt ke sath hi aayega....koshish jaari rahegi.....isi trah sath dete rahe............

KAVITA NEGI

Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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