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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
Apne jajbaato ko likhne ki koshish ki hai
Aaj apni baato ko likhne ki koshish ki hai
Apne dard ko kalam se likhkar
Apne ehsaaso ko jtaane ki koshish ki hai
Nahi jaante duniya kya smjhegi ise
Humne to mohbbat nibhane ki koshish ki hai
Dard ko seene me chupana hai mushkil
Dard ko likhkar mitaane ki koshish ki hai
Tu mujhse door hai chaahe jitna bhi
Har waqt tere paas aane ki koshish ki hai
Nafrat se bhare tere be-dard dil me
Humne pyar badhaane ki koshish ki hai
Apne jajbaato ko likhne ki koshish ki hai
Aaj apni baato ko likhne ki koshish ki hai
kavita ji,
aapki koshish achhi lagi, daad qubuul kijiyega....
jaise ki aapne kaha hai ki aapki khamiyoN ko nazaraNdaaz na kiya jaye i'sliye aapko kehna chahta hooN ki jo shabd "j" ya "z" se shuru hote haiN uNke talafuz samjhne ki koshish kijiye, jaise ki aapne likha hai "jajbaato", jabki sahi hota hai...."jazbaatoN"....
aapka dost,
vikram... 
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Vikram ji,
Aapki daad dil se qubool hai ji.....aage se j nd z me difference ka dhyaan rakhungi...isi trah sath dete rahiye,,,,,,,
Thanx a lot ......