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25th January 2007, 07:15 PM
mayank bhaiya tak nacheez ghayal ka salaam pahunche,
bhaiya bas dil cheer diya aapne, pehli to aapne kaafiya hi aisa chuna hai ki, poore kalaam me bahut tehjeeb aa gayi hai...!
aur saath me sher v aise hain ki bas dil se bas ek haaye hi nikal paayi...!
waise ye do sher bahut dil fareb rahe...!
chehre ke peechhe haiN chhupe chehre bohat, ShakleN hazaar
duShman kee kyaa pehchaan hai aur dost kis ko jaaniYe?
TooTaa hu'aa. looTaa hu'aa, sahmaa hu'aa, bikhraa hu'aa
ham aap ko dil de chuke haiN, maaniYe nah maaniYe!
bas bhaiya aage v aap yunhi likhte rahiye...! taki hum jaise nacheez kuch seekhte rahen...!
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