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An Incomplite Dream
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2nd March 2013, 02:06 AM
NaadaaN Sahaab Aadaab!
Ek taweel Arse baad aapki kisi kalaam se aur aapse rubaru huaa badi khushi ho rahi hai janab.....
Behad sahiN farmaya janab aapne ke youN toH dard ke ahsaas sabhi ke ziNdagi meiN aate hai magar fark shiddat ka hota hai... " bahut sahiN janab...
Chaliye aapki kalaam par aata huN waise toH amuman sabhi ashaar mujhe behad khoob lage... Par tabsiraa toH kalaam ke har sher par karnaa achcha hai naa...
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Originally Posted by naadaan
Mehfil-e Dard ke sabhi dostoN ko Aadaab.
YuuN to dard ka ehsaas har ek ki zindagi meiN aata hi hai magar farq shiddat meiN hoti hai. Mere is adna kalaam meiN kitni shiddat hai ye aap sab bataayeN.
Unki jafaaoN ki daastan, kya kaheN kya nahi,
Ferhisht ba.Di lambi hai, kya saheN kya nahi.
Kya kahne janab bada achcha matla hai daad..
Dar-O-Deewar ghar ke simat ke taabuut huey,
Farq kise hamare jiine se, kya raheN kya nahi.
WaaH waaH waaH janab dil ki gehrai se salaam is sher ke liye..
behad achcha sher kaha hai aapne daad daad daad...
Dil roya be-awaaz tuutke, intezaar-e-yaar meiN,
Ye chashm par suukh gaye, kya baheN kya nahi.
AaH kyaa kahen jee waaH behad achcha sher hai ... yeH chashm par sukh gaye.. bada achcha labo lahja raha daad daad daad.....
Aitbaar-O-Yakiin se banaaya tha jo Taaj mahal,
Niklaa faqt taash ka ghar, kya dhahe kya nahi.
Achcha hai janab.. gehraai hai daad..
Parat dar parat zindagii azaab banti gayi yuN,
Hum Khud ko dhuNdte haiN, kya taheN kya nahi.
Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa daad daad daad..
(Parat dar parat= layer upon layer,
taheN= Plural of Teh=cover or folds as in clothes)
Apni rai aur rehnumai se ata farmaayeN.
DuaaoN ke saath Ijaazat,
Naadaan
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Ekk Achchi kalaam se nawaza hai NadaaN sahaab.. badi achchi gazal rahi... Meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN mujhe jahaaN tak yaad hai ke NadaaN sahaab Maqta bhi khoob likhate haiN.. toH janab kahiN maiN galat toH nahi huN...
Khair likhate rahiye...
Aate rhaiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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