[ISHK EK IBADAT]

Originally Posted by Ritu18525

Namaskaar Dosto.N,

Gopal Das Neeraj jee ke "karwaN gujar gaya, gubar dekhte rahe.." ke pattern per ek koShiSh pesh kar rahi hooN. Apki ra'i ka intjar rahega.
Yeh rachna 2 phases me.n divided hai.
Pehle me.n ishq ki khumari aur dusre hisse me.n virah ki peedha!

Aap tak pahuche toh suchit kijiyega..

kali khili kuSum saje, Sitare jhilmila uthe,
Dil mile tere mere ke bhanwre geet ga uthe..

Yun laga ki jaise preet mil gayi hai ab mujhe,
le chaluN aa le chaluN un ghataoN ke taley..

Hath thaam kar ke sath chal diye vo chal diye,
paaT paaT jugnuo.N ke jaise jal rahe diye..

Raah thi kaThin magar sath woh jo mil gaya,
jaise sookhTe huye suman ko praan mil gaya..

is qadar thi khushi ke raat bhi dhali nahi.N,
subah ki talash me.N saaNjh Gunguna uthi..

SaNwar SaNwar nikhar nikhar chirag jhilmila uthe,
kali khili kuSum saje sitare jagmaga uthe..!!


~~Ishq ke badal hat gaye aur virah ki bela aa gayi~~

Rukh badal liya tha jaise waqT ki hawao.N ne,
Dard jaisa dikh raha tha un ghani ghatao.N me.n..

Hum abhi SiSak SiSak raaT kat,Te rahe,
Mil rahi thi woh saja jisse bhagte rahe..

KaaT kar din kabhi raaT ki panaah me.N,
Gum huye andhero.N me.n ujalo.n ki chaah me.N..

Baadlo.N ke beech woh dhua.n sa uTh raha,
Jaise shwet chaaNd ki chaNdni ko dho raha..

utha gubar yaado.N ka to raah dagmaga uThi,
khaDa tha mehel jaha.N woh neev charmara uthi..

Aas jaise mit gayi chah jaise mar gayi,
Chahto.n ke iss bhanwar me.N Aah ghar kar gayi..

Hum abhi darey darey kud ko thamte rahey,
yaado.N ke jharokhey se door jhaNkTe rahey..

Kaale kaale megh saare tab hi gaDgadha uthe,
kali khili kuSum saje sitare jagmaga uthe..


~ritu~
...Ek mausam

ritu jee
radhe radhe

badi purjor koshish rahi aapki dil se daad vaise mujhe virah ki peeda me anand jyada aata hai
yun hi likhti rahiye
duaon ke saath