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ghayalparwana · 4th May 2003, 12:06 PM

Bahut khoob !!

Achha likha hai aapne..khaas kar ke yeh kuchh lines

haatho ki lakheero ko miitaa kar dekha hai meine
kaanch ki chuddiyon ko kankha ke dekha hai meine
woh kabhi bhi sunte nahi mere jazbaato ko
apni aankho se dil ki baat samjha kar dekha hai meine

Apni bebasi ko bahut hi haseen tareelke se bayaan kiya hai aapne..

Likhte rahiye
Varinder

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ghayalparwana Registered User Offline Posts: 1,128 Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: London Rep Power: 24	4th May 2003, 12:06 PM Bahut khoob !! Achha likha hai aapne..khaas kar ke yeh kuchh lines haatho ki lakheero ko miitaa kar dekha hai meine kaanch ki chuddiyon ko kankha ke dekha hai meine woh kabhi bhi sunte nahi mere jazbaato ko apni aankho se dil ki baat samjha kar dekha hai meine Apni bebasi ko bahut hi haseen tareelke se bayaan kiya hai aapne.. Likhte rahiye Varinder kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...