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20th July 2014, 01:06 AM
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Originally Posted by N@zneen
Tumhari is nazm mein rawani hai, sachche jazbon se saji behad khoobsurat nazm, waise kafi lambi nazm hai lekin padhte waqt pata hi nhi chala kab khatm hogaya, tum bht achcha likhte ho...pls keep writing.
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hosla afzai ka shukriya naaz g
wahi puraani baat repeat karna chahuga k mujhe likhna nahi Aata jab ye mere zehan me aaye the bs kuch alfaz the ye nazm kaise bane Pata nahi aur ab agar kuch likhne ki koshish karta hu to kafi mushkil hoti hai aur likha nahi jaata hai Pata nahi phir kabhi kuch likh pau ya nahi lekin koshish zarur karta hu
aapne ise read kiye pasand kiye uske liye teh dil se shukriya kehta hu
aise hi saath dete
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara
sa
dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara
ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana
ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana
I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my
tears bcz
My smile is fake.......
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