8th November 2006, 12:50 AM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
pooja ji
pehle to main mere dost dilip ko mubarakbad deta hu k itna achha sher likha uspe se aapne puri gazal bana di
aapka jawab nahi maan gaye!!!!!!!
dard ko bayan karne me aap to badi mahir hai ..bina dard mile aap itna achha likh sakti ho bahot khub!!!
puri gazal kabile tarif hai
achha laga padhke aur khusi bhi hui mujhe bahot jab aap itna achha likhti ho achha lagta hai
tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..
sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…
ye do sher bahot hi pasand aaye mujhe
dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga
KHUS RAHO
aapka dost
dhaval
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dilip ji dhaval ki pahali daad apke liye.......haa dhaval mujhe yun to koi gam nahi fir bhi dard kalaam likhti hu.mein mahobbat ko aur khushiyon ko to bayan kar hi nahi sakti. isi liye....khaai apko ye do sher pasand aye meri khush nasibi...aapki daad mujhe kabuul hai dil se...........ok ji
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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