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15th May 2006, 01:41 PM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Jazbaat hain kuch Dil ke jo Kaagaz par abb aate nahin
Ehsas hain unke Jo Khayallon mein abb aate Nahin

Meri Palkon par aaj bhi Simte hain kuch Lamhe
Wo Pal kyun thehre hain…Kyun Guzar abb jate nahin

waaah....bahut khoob likha hai...


Kshitiz ke paar kisi ne Chand koi khilaya tha
Ye aur baat hai ki Taare bhi humein Abb bulate nahin

Dua thi….tu bane Gulshan, main beshaq Veerana
Khaak ho rahe iss Dil mein Armaan koi abb Sazate nahin

well expressed....


Bebasi hai kuch aisi ke Khamosh hai aaj “wafa”
Rusva na ho tu, teri Bewafai ka Raag hum abb gaate nahin

aah... very well expressed... loved this sher....

Wafa,

Ek baar fir bahut hi khoobsurat aur asardaar kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.... khoosurati se ehsaas piroye hin... I liked it a lot... o keep writing like this.... TC...
Pulkit....

bahut bahut shukriya...aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya....bahut shukriya....aapke reply ka intezar rehta hai....aap yahan aaye...acha laga.....shukriya

apna khayal rakhyiega


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