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Re: Re: Hua Kya Hai - 17th May 2006, 05:21 PM

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Originally posted by manoj kureel
Meri Mazaar ko Roz chhoo kar jate hain Wo
Koi pooche unse ke unki Raza kya hai

Kafan mein jhank kar kya dekhte ho tum
Bata bhi do abb ismein Bacha kya hai

Diya jalakar meri Rooh ko behlate ho tum
Abb nahin hoon Main ismein Shuba kya hai

Ashq beh rahe hain kitni hi ankhon se “wafa”
Hum soye hi toh hain Bas aur hua Kya hai


WAH..!!!
KYA BAAT HAI..>!!
WAFA JI...MUJHE hairat hai itna sundar gazal se ab tak mein mehroom kyun raha???bahoot gehre jazbaaton ko jubaan bakshi hai aapne..magar na jane kyun kafan-mazaar ki baatein aapse padhna acha nahin laga.
meri daad kuboool kijiye..likhte rahiye...aapki gazlon ki shamma yunhi roshan hoti rahe.,.yeh umeed hai.
take care
-MANOJ

Manoj ji….

aapke aane se ye ghazal aaj safal hui hai….poori hui….aapke reply ka intezaar rehta hai meri ghazalon ko……aapse wah paana…bahut badi baat hai….mujhe khushi hui aap yahan aaye..meri ghazal ko pasand kiya..bahut bahut shukriya

aur jahan takk kafan ya mazaar ki baat hai toh Manoj ji…ye bhi toh ek sachai hai jeevan ki jiska saamna har kisi ko ek na ek din karna hi hai….

aapki di hui daad sar ankhon par…..aur jab takk dard rahega wafa likhti rahegi……

apna khayal rakhyiega


Aaina mujhse meri pehli si surat maange
   
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