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10th May 2006, 01:45 PM
anil ji aapki yah posr us dard ko bayan karti hai jo aaj kal sites main faila hua sa hai ...........anmika ne sab kah diya jo isko pad ke mere jahan bhi aaye they ...........kavitaa bahvano ko vayakt karne ka mdhayam hai ......usko kavitaa main hi range rahne de toh jayda accha hai .........par jab yah sab jahan per chha jata hai toh kavitaa kahan ho pati hai ..........sirf rajneeti hi rah jati hai ........umeed hai aapki yah post bahut se logo ko sachai ka ehasas karwaygi aur fir se shayrari , payr dard ko izhaar karne ka sundhar madhaym ban jayegi.................
apne apne kad kee fikr rahee
chand aur channdnee ka kad
kam hota raha
tum apas main uljhe rahe
chand shayer tha rota raha
sach kahoon
tum jahan ho woh bazm-e-sukhan nahee
bas jalsazee hai
main yahan rah nahee sakta
ye charcha-e-ahsas nahee
sirk kabootar bazee hai
jab failsla aye mujhe jaga dena
kaun jeeta kaun hara bata dena
main sukhanvar hoon geeton kee
lashen ghar utha layoonga
tanha baith ke
murda geet gayoonga
tum bas neend se jaga dena
kaun jeeta kaun hara bata dena
with best wishes
ranju
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