Quote:
Originally Posted by Kavita Negi
Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad
Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad
Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad
Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad |
wah kavita ji...dil khush ho gaya padh kar...
aap bahut jald seedhiyaaN chadh rahiN haiN aur mujhe khushi hoti hai ye dekh kar...mujhe aapka flow bahut natural lagaa...bas maza aa gaya padh kar...
yuNhi likhti rahiyega....aur mujhe ummeed hai ki aane wale waqt meiN aapki kalam se ye aalam zuroor raushan hoga....
Keep it up...
Best wishes,
vikram